I’m glad that Severus and Sirius have stopped squabbling like a pair of school boys. I hope we get to experience Harry’s return to Hogwarts.
| Title: Potions
| 30 Jun 2019 8:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
This quote:
When I say one thing, Black, I want you to never do another like you did in my study with my Pensieve, do you understand?
Was impossible to understand. I think I got the gist of it, but the structure is just way off...
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out! I fixed it up, hopefully it makes more sense now.
I sincerely hope Harry can stay in this reality. Severus and Sirius will need a referee.
Thanks for the update
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