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Reviews For To Have a Father
Title: Epilogue 04 Mar 2023 3:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a lovely story! Thanks so much.
Title: Epilogue 30 Apr 2021 12:14 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the fun and interesting story
Title: Epilogue 06 Jul 2019 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for an original and entertaining story
Title: Epilogue 16 Jun 2016 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed) [Report This]
    I can not believe someone so young wrote this great story. I thought you did a terrific job.

    I thought you did a very good job with Snape's character. A lot of authors have a hard time writing his speech and action nuances and I thought you did really well here. Harry was good but a bit mature. Sirius was charming as well as the world you created in the little town they lived in.

    Your premise gets an A++ for originality. This story could've gone in another direction as well. Harry could've gone back to his reality with the knowledge of what he knows (and Snape as well since he was there too) and build a relationship with Snape in his reality. Or - plot twist - Harry learns he is actually Snape's son in his reality because similar events happened except for Snape/Lily's marriage and that Snape knew Lily was carrying his child. Ah well. :)

    Thanks for writing! I hope you continued to develop your skills over the years because you are a talented writer!
Title: Epilogue 03 Aug 2011 12:08 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    i loved it really did touching n comical at the same time!! plz do write that sequel im dying 2 read more!
Title: Epilogue 12 Jul 2010 6:31 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *applauds* Well done! Such an excellent fic - I really enjoyed this from start to finish. I was so sure Harry would have to go back to his own reality for a bit there!

    Thank you for sharing such a brilliant story - I'll definitely be reading the sequel.
Title: Epilogue 28 May 2010 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Arwen Evenstar (Signed) [Report This]
    Your characters are a bit to OC, but they are all brilliantly done, and the story is unique in its own way. Good Job.Hopefully the sequal will be just as good and unique.
Title: Epilogue 12 Feb 2010 4:35 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    10
Title: Epilogue 18 Sep 2009 6:21 am
Reviewer: Lynn H (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good! Sweet but not sappy. Realistic emotions - I hate stories that have the emotional depth of a teaspoon...
Title: Epilogue 17 Sep 2009 8:10 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I simply love your story from the first to the last chapter. It is not one of those stereotypical Snape-Harry-Father-Son stories. I'm a little sad that the story is completed now - I would have loved to read many more chapters. I'm looking forward to read the sequel to 'To have a father'.
    Thank you for sharing your stories with us readers. This one will always be one of my favorites!!!

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