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Reviews For To Have a Father
I thought you did a very good job with Snape's character. A lot of authors have a hard time writing his speech and action nuances and I thought you did really well here. Harry was good but a bit mature. Sirius was charming as well as the world you created in the little town they lived in. Your premise gets an A++ for originality. This story could've gone in another direction as well. Harry could've gone back to his reality with the knowledge of what he knows (and Snape as well since he was there too) and build a relationship with Snape in his reality. Or - plot twist - Harry learns he is actually Snape's son in his reality because similar events happened except for Snape/Lily's marriage and that Snape knew Lily was carrying his child. Ah well. :) Thanks for writing! I hope you continued to develop your skills over the years because you are a talented writer!
Thank you for sharing such a brilliant story - I'll definitely be reading the sequel.
Thank you for sharing your stories with us readers. This one will always be one of my favorites!!! |
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