Snape holds so many misconceptions and preconceived notions! I’m looking forward to seeing him disabused of those.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Oct 2009 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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I like it, but the only thing that kind of annoys me is the use of the word "snakes," instead of students. I could see using it once or twice, but it gets plain and boring after a while... almost like when a writer just puts "he said, he said, he said," over and over instead of switching it up. Just my thought is all. I enjoyed seeing what Slytherin would run like as opposed to Gryffindor, but I feel sad for Harry already knowing what he will miss out from in the other house.
I absolutely LOVE Snape's names for Harry! The whole, "Boy-Who-Lived to Annoy" was fantasic!
Again, good and still interested to see how things turn out. I wonder what Harry has to order?
is this story also on fanfiction.net? seems like i've read it before
Author's Response: Yes, it is. I update both places (here and there) at the same time.
Great chapter! I like it already! ^^
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 Sep 2007 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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I'm so excited! I LOVE LOVE LOVE Slytherin Harry fics, and you're one of my favorite authors.
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= happy reader
"He had nursed the dread, worked it in his mind like clay, molded it into the perfect shape of his hate and desire for vengeance."
Funny, perfect line XD
Also - SNAPEY! You are soooo stupid sometimes. Honestly. Plus Slytherin as its own little militan organisation? Interesting XD I have this feeling that that's how the Bolsheviks began, before they like took over the whole of Russia XD
Sneaky sneaky Slytherins XD
Great chapter. It really sets the scene. Ooh, and a third chapter already posted? Awesome!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 24 Aug 2007 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous)
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Ooh! What could Harry possibly need from Diagon Alley? Will Snape learn that Harry's not his father?
More! More! I need more! :)
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