Big thanks to Miri, with whom I wholeheartedly agree.
Great chapter!
I'm kind of confused -- I feel like part of what I've read in one chapter is always in the next chapter... I feel like I'm rereading the same chapter -- until I get to a certain point -- then it's different.
"Too still, really, for an eleven year old."
ARG. SNAPEY - THE WORLD IS HANDING YOU LEMONS AND YOU'RE JUST LETTING THEM GO MOULDY.
Honestly, man. Can't you take a hint? Your points are dropping faster than an anvil dropped off a cliff.
"Suppressing a sigh, Severus ignored the stuttering Professor Quirrell beside him and swept from the Great Hall."
I repeat: ARG. You are made of first-class idiot, Snapey. However, I do realise that when you
FINALLY pull your head out of your arse and start looking at Harry, not the ghost of a dead man, you will be properly remorseful XD
jharad17: you are definately made of something more awesome than awesome XD
Wow, nice point of view! It made reflecting on the last chapter a lot easier. It's nice to know the things that Snape realizes and recognizes. Poor Harry.
Nicely done tension in this. It's great! i'm enjoying your little Harry. Hehe, I loved when Snape went "don't make me drag you". Ack! I would have got up and ran too!
Good chapter!
I know most of my reviews say basically the same thing, but I continue reviewing each time because I know you like getting reviews! As usual, excellent chapter and I'm very curious to see what's going to happen next!
Please update soon! I just started reading it, but I like it already and I want to see where you go with the story.
Yes!! Go Poppy - she knows that Severus has a huge blind (rage) spot where Potters are concerned (and why!), so I'm glad she's helped start a fire under him with regards to Harry's situation!! I'm hoping that the Dursleys' are in for a major Snape!Smiting!!
Poor Harry's being so brave, but he really does need someone in his corner!!
Great Chapter!! I'm looking forward to the next update, where I'm sure Severus will get his eyes opened!!
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| Title: Chapter 6
| 03 Sep 2007 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Interesting chapter! Hope you can update soon!
Yea, I'm glad that Severus is figuring things out, and I can't wait to see what happens with Poppy. You also gave us another little hint of things with the other Slytherins.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 02 Sep 2007 9:01 pm
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| Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous)
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Thank you for having Snape clue in to Harry's problems sooner rather than later. Even as much as he thinks he despises the child, he has too much (supposed) experience with children from abusive homes to have been oblivious to Harry's blatant clues much longer. Brilliant! Keep 'em coming.
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