I love the way you’ve portrayed this classic scene. So nicely done.
I love this story!! You do such a good job of keeping to the characters, but still molding them into something you created. Great job, please update soon!
"Maybe you will, but a Malfoy? I think not."
Sorry Malfoy, but you have just been demoted from possible friend to head noob again.
But WHY oh WHY did Snape have to go mention that whole 'ungrateful body' thing in front of Malfoy? SOMETIMES YOU ARE SOOO STUPID, SNAPEY. Well, unless of course this information inspires a complete character change in Malfoy, in which case I suppose I won't mind it as much XD
| Title: Chapter 9
| 08 Sep 2007 1:25 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Nice chapter. please update soon!!
Yes, Harry stood up for Neville, and I like Teddy and Millicent, and I have a feeling you are going to make Draco actually teachable. And Draco sounds jealous that Harry caught Hermione's attention. Did you plan that?
That was awesome. Definitely the best Slytherin!Harry remembrall scene I've ever read. I take it Lucius isn't Father of the Year in this one either? Hopefully Harry and Draco will get along better; although, I'm sure that Draco will be disgustingly jealous over Harry being Slytherin's seeker.
Another excellent chapter!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 07 Sep 2007 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous)
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good chapter keep up the good work
I wonder if Draco caught the comment about Snape and Pompfrey having just finished "repairing his ungrateful little body"...
| Title: Chapter 9
| 07 Sep 2007 7:51 am
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| Reviewer: Miri (Anonymous)
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Hehe. Gryffindorks. *snort* And Snape all *pleased* with himself.
It'd be cool if Harry and Hermione were friends, even if she is a Gryffindork. Since you know, Ron's being such a prat. Besides, think of the potential trauma, drama, and angst possibilities. Think how many opportunities it would give Zabini to be simply intolerable. Think how *appalled* both Snape and McGonagall would be. :) C'mon. You know you want to. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, but life's all about not getting what you want. ;P I have to admit, though, that I had ulterior motives for having Hermione stick up for Harry like that. Thanks!
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