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Title: Chapter 10 07 Nov 2022 10:05 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, eclairs and cocoa sounds so good! I fear that I am years too late though, and I would review even without, given how marvelous this story is.
Title: Chapter 10 03 Mar 2008 2:28 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Is Lucius Malfoy good or bad in this fic, I wonder?
Title: Chapter 10 14 Sep 2007 8:23 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I like how the story is going through the school year. I also like how Draco and Harry are rivals, not best friends as often happens. I think that this has more potential for drama, and it will be interesting to see what comes of it, if Draco will indeed be nicer to Harry for appearances sake, or if he will not.

    It sure sounded like Lucius was bribing Snape for putting Draco on the Quidditch team. I suppose that in canon, Snape would have reminded Lucius that 1st years are not allowed on the school teams, but with harry being on it, he very well can't.
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Why, oh why does it always have to end at the most intersting part?

    Please, update soon! I like this story very much!
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 5:58 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I wasn't going to review this chapter, but who can pass up eclairs and cocoa? Just kidding. Snape reminds me a bit of a kid in a toy store, eyes wide with wonder. Instead, his eyes are opened more and more with each revelation of who Harry truly is. It's a bit fun watching as all of his preconceptions come crashing down around him. And this is only the first year.

    Thanks for the update...
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 6:01 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I love seeing the level of involvement Snape has with Harry being in his house. He still clearly has a lot of preconceptions that he's holding onto, or at least he's hanging on to the feelings he had about Harry while he still held to those first assumptions.

    I'm looking forward to seeing how a lot of the events in the Fall work out in this story, with Snape dealing with Harry instead of McGonagall.

    And then there's the home visit. Considering Snape already knows that the Dursleys must have been abusive, what does he hope to gain from the home visit? Just how awful can the Dursleys behave around Snape? It sounds like maybe Vernon killed the owl. If he's willing to kill a Hogwarts owl, he's obviously going to be pretty irate at having an actual Hogwarts professor visit. And will Petunia remember Severus?
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 4:24 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    One of these days I'm gonna take you up on your promises -- and I'll gain x-amount of weight, but I'll be happy with all my eclairs, and cocoa, and frappaccinos, so I think I'll be okay ;)

    I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm still not sure of Severus's movitive behind being a git to Harry, even though he's starting to see Harry for who he really is (well, kinda) and that he's a damaged child. But, I still liked it. Very Snape. So good for you for keeping in character!
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 3:30 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing! Update uber soon! I just had a quick question: Why is this part of the A Boy Called Whelp series? It says the Whelp II-- The Wrath of Snape precedes this? Is that true? Will you tie the stories together in some way?

    Author's Response: I don't know why, that was really weird.  I know I didn't *add* it to the series, and now I've removed it, so it should be fine.  Alas, no, I shall not be tying this story to that series.  My apologies for the confusion . . . and thanks for the review!  --rachel
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 2:25 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is not your personal assistant, Sev!... lol.

    Great chapter. I loved every word of it :) The scene with Lucius was really interesting. I'm curious to see how that unfolds.

    I've been waiting for an update from you all day!! I'm so happy right now...lol.
Title: Chapter 10 11 Sep 2007 1:10 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I really feel bad for those owls that Snape sent off to the Dursleys ... it sort of reminds me of this story I read once by Roald Dahl where this woman murdered her husband with a frozen leg of lamb and then cooked it and served it to the policement who came to investigate.

    ... Morbid XD But not like the Dursleys would eat the owls or anything though I'm not putting it above them to kill them :C

    I like how being in Slytherin hasn't changed Harry at all really, and I'd like to think that he probably (hopefully) won't change all that much. Snapey being all like USE INFORMATION AGAINST EACH OTHER and totally chanelling Mad-Eye Moody is cool, though I'd like to think that Harry probably knows what it's like to be embarrassed and ridiculed and [hated] so is loathe to you know do the same.

    Yeah just some random musings XD And awesome chapter, btw. Can't wait for the final Snape-Dursley confrontation C:

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