Very interesting explanation of events between Harry and the Baron.
"Right," Harry said, blanking his expression and making sure his voice held no trace of the deep annoyance he felt. "That sounds very reasonable."
"You are extraordinarily impertinent."
"Yes, sir."
**I loved that part. It was as if Harry was saying...yeah, I know I am...can we get on with this? lol
This was a great chapter. You're doing a really nice job of keeping up the suspense and developing a plot. I can't wait for the next update :)
These last couple of chapters have been excellent! I'm curious to find out if Snape will enter Harry's mind and what all he might see. Hope you can update again soon!
I really like the back story and the Bloody Baron's explanation about what had happened to Harry. So looking forward to Severus' "talk" with the Dursleys. Keep up the awesome work, looking forward to the next chapter. LES
| Title: Chapter 15
| 22 Sep 2007 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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The story is going great! Love this Snape and can't wait to see the confrontation with the Dursleys'.
And still no trip to the Dursleys! You're killing me here ;)
I actually really enjoyed this chapter, and the light, but not mean, banter that went on between Harry and Snape. I liked seeing Snape being the adult in Harry's life, even if it is just as Head of House - in the way that he let Harry know what was expected of him and that it was the adults job to figure out how to deal with the culprit.
Looking forward to more :)
| Title: Chapter 15
| 22 Sep 2007 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous)
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Oh, Harry is so awesome in this chapter. I love him when he's so feisty and trying to figure things out. He really seemed like the canon book 1 Harry.
Wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry!
I like how Harry is quite competent and self-possessed in this story even if the Dursleys have been horrible. And I still really love your Bloody Baron.
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