Ah, so much revealed! Looking forward to the next chapter.
This young Harry is a complex, fascinating character. I am enjoying his growing friendship with Teddy--whose knowledge of detecting spells is intriguing in an eleven year old. I would like to see an alliance with Draco also, which I do hope the candy doesn't ruin! (I worry, I worry! Which means you are very good at keeping us as paranoid as Moody). Great scene at the end with Snape and Harry, to which the Baron's pithy commentary always adds that little something. So happy the next chapter is done already!
Wow. Both Slytherin! and Whelp will be dealing with the Parseltongue issue, huh? Awesome!
Anyway, wow. What a chapter. There was so much in it! It was a nice change of pace, that's for sure. I mean, I love it no matter what, but it was refreshing to get something so "jam-packed". Now I can't wait to see what Snape learns this next chapter - there's a heck of a lot there, man. Lol. Yay for Snape and his Legilimency!
Harry kicked Snape out of his mind!!! OMG!! Go Harry - I think that Snape won't have any trouble teaching Occlumency to Harry!! And Harry and Draco are both on the team - a banner day for Harry all around!!!
I'm curious to learn what Zabini's problem is, whether it's just jealousy or something darker - and who did give Harry the chocolate frogs and if they mean to help or harm him?!
Fantastic chapter - you're really setting things up here, and it's leaving me on the edge of my seat in anticipation!!
Scarlett
Ohh! I can't wait until the weekend!
I hope that the box of chocolate frogs were from Ron, Neville, and the like. I just don't know how you would explain that!
Really good characterization of Harry after Snape sees his memories, although it's kinda hard to remember that Harry's only 11 years old here. But that's ok too, because he has grown up more due to those experiences at the Dursleys.
Is Teddy a half-blood or muggle born? He certainly acts like it with his sticking up for Harry and defending of the Gryffindors and such. Or, is it that he's one of Harry's attackers? I hope that's not it. But I can't wait for when we do find out who they are!
Great chapter! I especially love how Snape is becoming more mentor-like with Harry, it shows that he is getting over his bias from James. That's good!!
Again, Can't Wait For The Weekend!!
Oh Snape is sneaky! Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 27 Sep 2007 1:13 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Severus will meet the Dursley's, that should be fun!
Update soon! Great chapter.
I loved it. LOVED IT! Good old Draco...always getting what he wants..lol. I'm dying for the next chapter!
Oh no Severus better be careful or he's going to destroy Harry's trust, but I do see the his point of seeing the memories because of his "meeting" with the Dursleys. Looking forward to their continued conversation and the next chapter. LES
Great chapter! I'm super happy to see that the Dursley trip will be happening next! So pretty please update again soon!
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