Dumbledore disappoints again. So frustrating, but at least Snape can take a more active role now.
Good chapter! *points at Severus* I knew you'd admit it sooner or later!
And damn that Dumbledore! Snape should shove those memories down his throat! Dumbledore seems a bit more apathetic than usual. Is something up?
Author's Response: Hiya Jade, Thanks for the review! There's nothing really up with Dumbles (not like in Shadows, anyway) but he's just behaving the way I decided he would -- taking a bit of license, natch -- if faced with the crushing disappointment of a Slytherin!Harry.
Excellent chapter! Are you still having problems when your stories are updated? I didn't get the notice that this was updated but yet I did get the one for Whelp 2. Hrmm... sites been a bit off lately but hopefully it'll get fixed soon. Keep up the super awesome writing on all of your stories!
Author's Response: Hi Alexis, Yeah, my updates have been pretty wonky recently, sometimes not happening at all, and sometimes without the dates. But Jan's working on it, and trying to figure out what the bug is, so I hope it'll get better. Soon. :-) Thanks for the review!
Aww man, I was actually looking forward to Snape's temper... How could you disappoint me like that? ;) No, but really, this was a good chapter. I have to admit, I'm a Dumbledore fan, but in your story I want to kick him in the shins and hope he flinches even just a little.
But YAY for Harry 'n' Snape interaction/being forced together, no matter the reason :D *Double squee!*
I'm glad the Bloody Baron stopped Snape from making another mistake with Harry. I want him to go back to his thinking about taking charge of Harry. I want to see where that goes and how he does it and and and... Love it!
Ha!! Did Severus really think that detention would be more important that Quidditch?! Not bloody likely - there'll always be more detentions (especially for Harry it seems!) but Quidditch - and the chance to increase his standing with his fellow Slytherins - is paramount to Harry, and rightly so!!
I hope Severus realizes that these constant detentions, while keeping Harry close and hopefully out of harm's way, won't help Harry integrate better with his study group and fellow Firsties!!
Terrific chapter - I look forward to the next one!!
Scarlett
Just as I finish reading all the missed updates you update again yay! Excellent chapter and as always I look forward to more! Keep up the wonderful writing...
Skittles to you
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