Great chapter. I like the way you’ve characterized Snape.
| Title: Chapter 21
| 01 Dec 2010 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: Helese (Anonymous)
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I think this version of Snape is much more of an arse than he is in some of your other stories. Probably just my personal tenets, but I'm having a hard time understanding how Harry manages to keep his cool with the bastard.
I truly adore your stories, BTW. It can be really hard to find decent, well written Severitus fics with three dimensional characters. I wish you had a list of favorites on here - or fanfic.net. Do you, perhaps, have a list of recs you'd be willing to share? Helese2010 AT gmail DOT com
| Title: Chapter 21
| 18 Oct 2007 6:22 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I guess Harry will never have an easy time in this universe. Thank goodness for the Baron. Kudo's for creative use of an OC (even in JK's universe).
| Title: Chapter 21
| 13 Oct 2007 3:17 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry, another week detention...
Poor Harry keeps getting these nasty jobs to do in detention and now another week of detention! I surely hope Snape runs out of yucky jobs soon!
Man, I'd call him a bastard too, if I was in Harry's shoes. Good grief, that poor kid. Can't seem to do anything right... except everything. Man, how confusing is that? Haha, not what you write, just trying to explain it is... I could totally see right through Snape, though. What with the whole ending of the last chapter and the ending of this one. He just wants Harry to know who's in charge, and who he's supposed to respect. Still, poor Harry. I'd be shaking in my boots if I were him, lol.
Great job!
Oh Poor Harry!! He really is having a hard time of it!! I'm glad he told Severus about his scar hurting around Quirrell though - hopefully this will get Severus properly looking into the thing!! I'm glad Harry had fun during his practice and that Severus let him go a bit early so he can try to get some of his homework done!!
Scarlett
I really like the way you've had Snape realizing Harry's difficulties and some of the realities of Harry's life, but with very little relaxing of Snape's somewhat harsh manner toward Harry. And Harry's not the cowed kid of many of these types of stories, nor on the other hand, the really dark sort of kid either. It's quite a good tension between the two.
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