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Title: Chapter 23 08 Nov 2022 12:51 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for showing us so well how Harry got to his breaking point.
Title: Chapter 23 15 Feb 2022 8:16 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    So, I'm reading this on slow ffn and low and behold you say something about P&S and I'm like, "Wait?! Why am I reading it here then?!" So I'm over here now.
    I love Harry's meltdown.
Title: Chapter 23 28 Jan 2009 11:37 am
Reviewer: raininglemons (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was an awesome chapter. As I read how Harry tried to suppress his frustration and anger and then ended up taking it on the Bludger, I started crying. Right from the start as I started reading there was a burning urge to cry and go punch Snape. Awesome job on this. And I'm really glad that the Slytherins are sticking up for Harry too. :)
Title: Chapter 23 07 Aug 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's rage and fury finally bursting out, his house-mates' concern for him ALL triggering Severus' realization--FINALLY!--make this one of your best chapters ever. Great job.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Oct 2007 11:02 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't recall if I've reviewed this chapter. I don't think so.

    I loved this chapter and Harry's "meltdown." It makes so much sense that there'd finally be a "straw that breaks the camel's back." You've done a great job of building up that straw as well -- detentions, homework, eating, problems sleeping, dealing with other students, the whole thing gradually building until it all seems neverending.

    And how in the world will Harry ever believe in Snape's apology? Looking forward to finding out.
Title: Chapter 23 24 Oct 2007 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I guess the ball's in Harry's court now. I'm not sure how he'll respond, but I'm glad that Severus actually did apologize.

    It was really obvious what a horrible time Harry's been having, especially now that we see it through his eyes.

    I especially liked where he was thinking how unfair it was that the Dursleys hated him because of his mother, and Snape hated him because of his father. It really is a such a shame, because Harry himself is a good kid who doesn't deserve that. I do hope that he and Severus can rebuild their relationship and really get to know one another.

    Harry's meltdown was quite scary, and I'm just glad that Flint was able to get through to him.

    I'm so glad that "Walk the Shadows" is going to be updated next, but I can't wait to see what happens here next, too!
Title: Chapter 23 24 Oct 2007 6:14 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    YES!! **punches the air with glee**
    Severus finally did it!! He actually apologised!! OMG!! I'm am squeeing like a mad thing here, you've no idea!!

    Oh poor Harry!! What a horrible, horrible time he's been having!! I'm so glad that he's had his fellow Slytherins and the Bloody Baron to step up for him!! And I'm sorry that he hurt himself while trying to express his rage - I'm sure he needed to get it out though before he gave himself an ulcer!!

    Maybe now that Severus has pulled his head out of his butt, he can help Harry get caught back up and onto a far more reasonable schedule if he isn't stuck with a bunch of unfair detentions!!

    Terrific chapter!! I'm sorry work is making you work (Hee!), and I hope your schedule also gets more reasonable!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 23 24 Oct 2007 5:22 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sev apologizing! unheard of!! XD
Title: Chapter 23 24 Oct 2007 3:50 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha. I loved it! I'm thrilled we were able to see Harry's break down. It was beautiful in a twisted sort of way. I was curious why he glared at Snape during breakfast that way, and now we know. You've really thought through the small details, and that's great :D And congratulations on this becoming another nominated fic. That's really very cool, and you defintely deserve it.
Title: Chapter 23 24 Oct 2007 3:05 am
Reviewer: Miri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha! It's now official. I love Millie, yes, I do. There's nothing quite like a morally outraged 11 year old. Get her together with Hermione and SPEW might actually go somewhere. :)
    And I reckon Snape should count himself lucky she hasn't bitten his throat out yet.

    It's really rather charming to see how seriously the Slytherin's take Rule One, and it's surely going to set up an interesting dynamic when Voldemort resurfaces; gonna be kind of hard to reconcile sticking with your housemates while serving someone who so obviously wants one of 'em dead.

    Now here's hoping Harry can bring himself to accept Snape's apology, and/or Snape can control his temper if he doesn't.

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