Though this was a disturbing chapter, Snape’s entrance was grand and his words at the end we’re perfectly soothing.
I feel like I must have said this last time I read it, but I had something similar happen to me. The person never touched me, or threatened or anything, he just asked. He was someone who should not have, not a friend or anything, but family (I have a lot of it). Then, later, another family member did something inappropriate, not super obvious or particularly threatening, but it was not okay. And I am still super uncomfortable around anyone I'm not absolutely 100% certain about. I know, really, all it takes is one little incident and your sense of security vanishes. I think that when people threaten or make inappropriate innuendos aren't any less victims than victims of rape, because the mental repurcussion are terrible. And nobody should be ignored when this happens, I'm glad I had an amazing support system when it did.
Okay! You win--Severus has redeemed himself for his previous behavior toward Harry. His own heart has broken open; he himself is truly beginning to feel the love he holds for Harry. Well done; I look forward to more.
Title: Chapter 36
| 24 May 2014 6:28 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I cant think of a way to describe how awesome this was- it-it was-just- Wow! I really loved this chapter (and previous) just really brilliant!
Loved the final scene in this chapter so much. You have me crying. Now how am I supposed to continue reading? LOL
Title: Chapter 36
| 01 Dec 2010 11:26 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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!!
I think Severus is falling in love with little Harry Potter. (in a very paternal way, of course)
Title: Chapter 36
| 28 Feb 2008 6:52 pm
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Reviewer: chalicity (Anonymous)
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oh this is so touching a chapter! i absolutely love this story, harry's such a poor dearheart... *sends love* such a well-written and emotive story, i'm so glad i stumbled across it. :)
time for the bloody baron to be harry's constant companion, i think... *loves what you've done abut the baron and all his parts in the plot*
Title: Chapter 36
| 03 Feb 2008 8:21 am
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Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Oh God!!! This chapter was the best one since forever!!! I loved it and I hope that you get to write more often so that I could read or rather devour your chapters!!!
Title: Chapter 36
| 03 Feb 2008 4:39 am
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Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous)
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Great story, it seems very realistic and believable. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good work and I hope you will update again soon. ^_^
Title: Chapter 36
| 03 Feb 2008 4:12 am
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Reviewer: Skrewt (Anonymous)
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ohhh... what a good chapter. I love seeing Severus start to care for Harry like a son. I hope Gaius gets thrown out on his ear!
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