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Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow, this is the chapter I've been longing for! Severus finally really, truly, completely opened his heart to Harry, and whether it becomes official or not, they're father and son!

    I loved Severus' initial reaction to discovering how Harry Obliviated him...it was very in character and really, anyone would be angry at having their mind tampered with. I loved how the Baron tried to reason with Severus, and I especially loved how Severus let his anger go when he saw that Harry needed help and comforting.

    I don't know what you have planned for the future, but I have to admit that I hope Severus won't be a spy...it means he has to hide his relationship with Harry and I like it so much better when they can be open. And if Gaius has a brain (which he may not), it seems he'd figure that Severus' reaction was a little too fiercely protective for someone who is on Voldie's side.

    I hope Harry will be all right, and learn that he can trust Severus. I hope everything will turn out all right with Occlumency, and I hope Hermione will be safe from this Gaius sicko, too. I'm not going to say that I hope everything turns out right with Dursleys because I know that Sev won't let Harry go back to them, even if he has to kidnap the boy himself.

    Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for making me cry like a baby in this chapter. Poor Harry. What else can happen to the boy? He really has had a tough go of things, but it seems like now he finally has someone (really) to be there for him. And he has the Bloody Baron, too.

    Snape was wonderful in this chapter. I spent part of the chapter praying that Snape wouldn't go off on Harry before hearing his side of the story, but then I was completely blind-sided by what happened in the bathroom. Great job.

    Thanks so much for the update. Take care and keep on writing. Please!!!
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 3:35 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    "Like a father, who he could lean on and believe in, and trust."

    Awww, you're breaking my heart here. Especially since I fear Albus will do nothing to help... Again. Snape has got to get custody of Harry. He just has to.
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 7:43 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    We finally got some hurt/comfort moments! I love it! I had to stop and savor the moment before continuing to read :D It was fantastic. That Gaius is such a foul prick, I hope he gets his just desserts and fast. How anyone can be that offensive and overbearing... And really, Harry's reasoning is very normal and accurate for someone in his place. You're doing an incredibly good job, really.

    I cannot WAIT for more!
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 6:03 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!

    Your Harry just kills me - always sacrificing himself for others, never believing that anyone else will sacrifice themselves for him, I just want to huggle him and keep him safe!! And Severus is doing just that!! I love your Severus, and I can't wait until he brings down the Wrath of Merlin Himself on that horrible little pervert!! And he can spare a bit of that wrath for Dumbledore too, and make sure that Dumbledore understands that Harry. Isn't. Going. Back. To. The. Dursleys!
    Amazing Chapter!! Thank you!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 5:37 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, good one. Severus is going to use Avery for potions parts (if he can't get Dumbledore to act).

    You, you are going to do all 7 books?! WooHoo.

    Barbara (bowing before the master of all joy)
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 5:23 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! i jumped out of my chair and ran into the other room when i got to the part where snape walked into the lav. I got nervous lol!
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 5:03 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I'm happy that Snape is finally realising that he has fatherly feelings for Harry. I can't wait for more. Thanx for the chapter.
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 4:58 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was an intense and emotional chapter! I'm glad Severus was there to stop Avery and I really hope that Dumbledore will expell that rotten boy too. Great chapter and I cant wait to read more!
Title: Chapter 36 02 Feb 2008 4:22 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've never reviewed an End Note before: Yea!!! I'm soooo glad that BB could defuse Snape to some extent. Then again, with Obliviate or other memory charms, rape could happen easily in their world and no one would know.

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