Absolutly amazing! You captured the emotions so well! I love sensitive issues like this, and this chapter was just what I love!
Keep Writing!
| Title: Chapter 37
| 05 Feb 2008 9:26 pm
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| Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, but poor Harry. I'm glad that Gaius was expelled, but I believe Snape had it right when he wanted the Aurors called and not just his parents. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next update. ^_^
Brava!! I still think Severus should have used Gaius for potion parts, but I guess that would have caused a lot of paperwork.
So sorry for Harry that all he can think of himself is as a freak. (I know, Severus can use Vernon and Petunia as potion parts.).
Millicent should get points for being brave enough to go into the boy's lavatory and standing up to Prof Snape. Harry has good friends.
Mostly, though, he looked into the depths of his mug of cocoa, as if therein lay the truths of the universe. hehe i loved that line great chapter!
I think that, for me, that was the most upsetting chapter I've read of your stories. What you capture so well isn't just that Harry has difficulty trusting in others to care for him, or even that his self-esteem is so low. It's that he really doesn't even comprehend the very idea that someone would care for him. It's so completely ingrained that he has no value, that he doesn't matter, that he can't seem to even fathom the notion. Many writers get across the idea that Harry has low self-esteem or that he doesn't trust people, but you convey something even more deep and difficult to deal with. It seems to me that, with your version of Harry, it's not just a case of not believing it when Snape says he'll be there for Harry. Your Harry doesn't even know what that means, at least in relation to himself. "Surreal" I believe you had Harry think, and that fits. To Harry, it doesn't even seem like reality. Excellent chapter, as usual.
| Title: Chapter 37
| 05 Feb 2008 1:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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I loved it and you are greatest author ever!!! It was a brilliant chapter and I really am getting more greedy now as I am demanding you to update soon.
Yes! That evil boy is gone! I wonder though if that will be the last of him...? Excellent chapter and I loved the ending when Snape smiled!
This chapter and the last were just beautiful. Snape's ephiphany was heart-rending...although I don't think Harry understands any of it yet. Just beautiful.
yay! an update on one of my favorite stories! Good chapter :)
| Title: Chapter 37
| 05 Feb 2008 7:14 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Since I can't review this on FF.net, here goes:
I...sniff...enjoyed the hell...sob...out of this...gulp...chapter.
Loved...sniff...the Bloody Baron's revenge.
Loved...sob...Snape going to bat for Harry.
Only one problem...swallow...it wasn't really emotionally moving.
You know what I mean (wails).
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