It’s heartening to see Teddy and Millie stick by Harry. They make a fine Slytherin trio.
i just have to say that i have been reading fan fics for a while now and have always avoided harry-as-a-slytherin stories, i felt like they were too far from the actual stories, that said you have definatly changed my mind, this story is fab and i cant wait for more, thanks x
I'm so sorry that you're having health problems, and I'm really hoping you'll be better soon!
It was a great chapter. I enjoyed seeing interact with his friends, and it was good to see Hagrid, too. I'm glad he was accepting of the kids and not judgmental of them being Slytherins. I'm pretty curious about the book Teddy gave Harry and to see how Occlumency goes.
| Title: Chapter 39
| 22 Mar 2008 3:15 am
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| Reviewer: s. krewt (Anonymous)
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thanx 4 another good chap!!
| Title: Chapter 39
| 21 Mar 2008 6:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I don't care about slow reviews--just a good story! It's always great to see a new chapter! Doesn't seem like many authors will write a Slytherin Harry story, at least not from start to finish! When the kids were having fudge with Hagrid, you used the word 'potion' in stead of 'portion'. I think Harry was involved. I also think your way of having many Slytherin's against Harry but giving him a few friends within his house is very realistic. He's got a new trio--do they get a "catchy" nickname too???
Author's Response: Hi Harriverse! Thanks for the review; I fixed the typo -- thanks for pointing that out, too. So far, the new trio doesn't have a catchy name, but it's early yet, in their Hogwarts career.
Your chapters have been great. I love your stories and want you to finish but your health is imported don't over extend your self. Just get better and write when you can.
I am extreamly happy you updated! It's nice Harry got to visit Hagrid, he's a good friend, and now the kids have got more clues. I'm curious as to what they will discover next. I wish there was some Snape in this chapter though. Can't wait for the next chapter, Occlumency training = Snape! I am very interested to find out how that will go and if new discoveries will be made.
I'm sorry to hear you haven't been doing so well. We all appreciate your efforts in updating, regardless. These chapters are always a pleasure to read :)
And sometimes filler chapters are needed! I really liked seeing the interaction, regardless of what it took to get it, haha. I'm glad Hagrid is as kind and genuine as ever, and that we got to see some more interaction with the firsties. Any chance of Snape maybe acquiring a picture of James? I know it would take a lot out of him, but for the sake of a child like Harry...? Aww, the thought makes me all warm and fuzzy. You should take advantage of that and use the idea! ;)
Thanks for updating! It was great!
Sorry to hear about your poor health. Hope you get better soon.
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BEM
Another wonderful chapter! Perhaps you should eat some chocolate to feel better since it does have healing properties after all... :)
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