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Title: Chapter 42 09 Nov 2022 4:03 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, all explained now! Harry should have come clean!
Title: Chapter 42 23 Jul 2008 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Man! Harry is going to get it!
Title: Chapter 42 22 Jul 2008 4:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Woops! Didn't notice this chapter, hehe. Well, looks like I got my wish about the next chapter being posted soon! lol.

    Anyway, this chapter was very intense in the beginning. I didn't realize Harry had made an oath until the Barron said so, that was a shock. As I said, very intense scene. Poor Snape didn’t take the news well.

    Occlumency went rather... interesting, lol. Poor Harry is in trouble now! I bet he really wishes he had told the truth now. I’ll be keeping my eyes open for your next update!

    Author's Response: Thanks, snarky Beth!  I should have a new chapter in a week or so.
Title: Chapter 42 19 Jul 2008 5:53 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, Snape can't possibly be mad at him for saving Hermione! Though, I guess it is in his nature to be disappointed that Harry lied... Eek, I can't wait for the next chapter :D You have a way of holding me steadfast to your writing and I can't get enough.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape's cheesed about being lied to, but then, Harry's already been punished for that once, and for the incident as a whole.  Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 42 19 Jul 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    The correct verb in your sentence, "Either by enslaving the boy or by leeching the magic from his core" should be LEACHING, not "leeching". It's a process of extraction, not bleeding something out.

    Wonderful, wonderful story. You are one of the handful of authors who are able to maintain the canon feel of the HP characters. I love your work, am extremely glad you updated, and look forward to more! (Soon, if possible!, hint hint!)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I'm not sure of the verb correction, honestly -- I was going for a verb that meant Voldie would act like a leech and suck the magic out of Harry.  But leaching works, too.  Hmm.  I hope to have another chapter done soon, but right now I'm working on one for "Before the Dawn."
Title: Chapter 42 18 Jul 2008 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Captain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I can't wait to see what comes next!! I am leaving for the weekend so hopefully when I get back I will have another Chapter to read! Wonderful work! The character are in cannon and with the way you are writing your fic that would be rather hard to do. Congradulations!

    Captain

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 42 17 Jul 2008 11:55 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter, Harry's explanation ought to be interesting XD

    Author's Response: Some of the explanation he's already given, when he talked to the Baron a day or so after it happened.  But that was a long time ago, and Snape never heard the explanation, so he's in for a treat!  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 42 17 Jul 2008 6:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, very well written and everyone was in character, the look at the end from snape i can picture it in my mind and it made me smaile

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 42 17 Jul 2008 4:24 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! as usual of course lol looking foreard to hearing harry explain though!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Snape's really got his hands full with this one.
Title: Chapter 42 17 Jul 2008 4:01 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, not the "I am very disappointed" look! An excellent chapter and well worth waiting for. And I'm sure that trouble will result from that unintentional Wizard's Oath. You know, Hogwarts ought to have a class providing orientation to the wizarding world for muggle-born and muggle-raised students so they can learn about these kind of things (and things like how to write with a quill on parchment, the basics of wizard ing world civics, etc.). I truly love this story, Severus is still the Snape from the books but you're letting us see the side of him only his House members see or at least an unprejudiced view of him (the book Shape's character is observed solely through Harry's eyes and what JKR gave us can't be all there is to the man). Looking forward to what happens next and wondering just what it is that Dumbledore really intended by giving Harry the invisibility cloak when he did. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    I completely agree about having a special class for Muggleborn children, teaching them about things they should be very wary of doing, and things which they've not had any experience with before.  I know in canon, JKR has said that Hogwarts letters were often delivered by hand, by people who would explain to Muggle parents about the school, etc., but Harry's was a special case, but imagine if they had sent a team to the Dursleys to explain the school and such . . . what might have been different in his life just from that?  I'm glad Snape is still Snape in my story.  I want him to be as in charcter as possible, but from, as you say, another point of view. 

    Thank you for your review!


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