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Title: Chapter 43 09 Nov 2022 4:16 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a beautifully poignant rendition of the mirror scene.
Title: Chapter 43 06 Jun 2010 1:57 pm
Reviewer: Peach (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I actually just cried reading that; I didn't cry reading that scene in the book but I did just then! How touching...
Title: Chapter 43 14 Aug 2008 3:49 am
Reviewer: gwiwer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just sat through the entire thing, and I must say that this is the best Harry Potter-is-in-Slytherin story I've ever read. And it's certainly one of the best Harry Potter stories in general that I've read. Really enjoying it, and glad to see that it seems to be updated regularly.

    Please keep up the good work. Now that we haven't any more novels to look forward to, I'm going to enjoy reading this story as well as your other fiction. Thanks for writing!

    :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I do try to update about every two weeks or so (since I have the other two major stories (plus two more) to write.)
Title: Chapter 43 11 Aug 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwww of course Snape would be in the mirror! Another great chapter! I really like the way Severus and Harry are spending so much quality time together, and the contrasts between cannon Harry in terms of his reaction to the mirror and the way Snape teaches him. Greattt stuff!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 43 09 Aug 2008 8:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    That ending was so heartbreaking! The way you went about Harry’s discovery of the mirror and combination of the section from the book with your twists really flowed nicely together. Hopefully, this will be another step towards Harry and Ron becoming friends. I sure hope so, it totally crushed Harry when Ron was against him and I’d like them to be buds.

    I really like the times Harry spends with Sev, Harry can feel like he’s part of a family. I thought it was really great when Sev showed Harry his mom's sketch and how Harry made another one for Snape. It’s nice that Harry has a connection with his mom other then his eyes, too.

    Please post again when you can!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I figured, with Snape and Harry acting more friendly than in the books, it only made sense for Snape to share memories of Lily with her son, and giving him that connection he was so lacking before.  And yes, Ron and Harry will be . . . more civil to each other after this.

    Thanks again, for your review!

Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 10:05 pm
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, oh, oh! I can't believe it but you made the Mirror of Erised even more heartbreaking than in the books.

    Wonderful job so far! I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next (and I'm so excited that Ron and Harry are at least civil to each other in the end of this chapter).
Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniff, oh that is so sweet!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 2:15 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely way to depict The Mirror of Erised: including Severus.
    I also like the natural way Harry and Ron seem to be starting to become friends.
    Well done, well enjoyed, well appreciated!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I am trying to make Harry and Ron be more civil, at least.  We'll see how it works out.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 8:36 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just thinking about this story the other day. (Wondering when there might be an update.;-)
    Keep writing! Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Well, updates are a little slower than they used to be, but not too far between.  :-)  Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: kjpotter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh that last scene just made my heart ache. So sweet. Poor kid...

    Author's Response: Yeah, a bittersweet ending, to be sure.  But there'll be more fun ahead!  Thank you for reviewing.

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