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Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry and Ron are at least somewhat getting along.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! It was an interesting Occlumency lesson, and it was really very nice of Severus to show Harry the drawing his mother had done. That meant so much to Harry, and what meant even more was when Severus let him know how much he valued Harry's own drawing.

    I'm glad to see Ron beginning to come around. I like Harry's Slytherin friends a lot, but I like Ron and Hermione too, and it's good for him to have friends in both Houses.

    I felt so sad for Harry when he saw his family in the Mirror of Erised. That's always been one of the most poignant scenes in the whole saga to me, and I really like how you added the extended family and not only his parents. And Severus, too, with him and James apparently getting along. I love how Harry is considering Severus as part of his family, and it's a nice counterpoint to the fact that Severus also feels paternal towards Harry. But hopefully, Harry can have Severus as a parent figure in this universe.

    Fantastic job as always!

    Author's Response: Harry seeing his extended family in the mirror of Erised is in the original, actually.  I took the description from the book almost whole cloth.  But the bit about Severus, obviously that was me.  :-)  Ron and he will certainly be more civil after this experience, and yes, it's good for Harry to have friends in both (maybe even all) Houses.  That's what the Hat says, anyway, lol.  THank you for reviewing, Kristeh, as always.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter; you did a great job of showing how Harry really desperately wanted his parents to be real, to be there, and for Snape to be a part of it too.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  It seemed very natural to add Snape in to the picture Harry desired, of a real family who wanted him.  We'll see what we can do about making that real.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awwwww.... *hugs harry*

    brilliant chap! i like these occlumency lessons MUCH better.

    Author's Response: The lessons certainly are easier on Harry this way!  Thanks for reviewing, skrewt!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:14 am
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, i loved the mirror scene, how Snape just appeared and fit right in. Beautiful.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  That seemed natural to me, that Harry would desire such an outcome.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 2:34 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story, and how carefully it is integrated into canon, yet has a witty take all its own.

    Author's Response: THank you!

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