This was brilliant. Read it in one sitting and loved every minute of it - full of emotions and just...gah, I can't even put it into words. Great story!
This is really good and I like it. I think you should definately put up a sequel soon! Um maybe the tale could be called "Slytherin's Chamber"? or something like that anyways.
Peace!
CheyRain
| Title: Chapter 51
| 03 Jul 2011 3:33 am
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| Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 51
| 23 May 2011 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Ale Smith (Anonymous)
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequal to this story was wonderful, so much so that i am now going to your page to look at your other stories. please keep up the good work and dont let the flamers discourage you
Awesome story! I'm now off to see if the 2nd story is around.
ahhh loved it :) when is the sequel going to be written? xx
| Title: Chapter 51
| 12 Jan 2011 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Jurassic0Al (Anonymous)
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I've decided to write a review of the whole thing rather than one chapter. This is easily the best and most intriguing piece of fan-fiction I've read. That you took the time to essentially rewrite the first book is astounding.
Your work is not perfect, however. Many times I found words- profanity especially- and dialogue that I rarely if ever encountered in the HP books themselves.
But aside from noting that, and a general note that this work was not flawless, I have no other complaints. I especially enjoyed scenes from or based off the original book, since they were easiest to recognise. Perhaps the best depiction of what difference Harry being sorted into Slytherin would have made was at one of the Quidditch games, when Millicent Bullstrode, Crabbe and Goyle, and Theodore Nott mixed it up with Neville Longbottom and Ron Weasley. The drastically changed relationships between Harry and the rest of the school are, I believe, depicted very accurately.
The picture I ultimately came away with was a Harry Potter with a silver and green badge on his robes. Still chock full of that Gryffindor boldness and valour, but decidedly different from the Gryffindor he, in this story, never became.
All in all, the quality of your work here was outstanding. Imperfect, yes, but I would hesitate to assert that I could have done better.
I have read your statements about writing a sequel, maybe more than one, to this story.
I sincerely hope you will, and eagerly look forward to the day you finish your alternate "Chamber of Secrets".
I wish all fanfiction was set at this standard. If all fanfiction were as good as this or better, we'd all be better of for it.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 16 Jul 2010 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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great story, thanks for all the time and effort you clearly poured into it!!!
*sigh* i was so hoping there would be a sequel....
this is very very good!!!
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