That was a great ending...loved the bit with Draco xx
Ah, the ending of an enjoyable story. It really was fun to read and I look forward to year two being posted :)
Poor Gryffindor never saw it coming (like Slytherin in cannon), the cup was just whisked away. Though when I first read Harry Potter I too was thrilled with his House winning, I now-a-days agree with Snape about it being a bad thing to encourage Harry to take dangerous actions.
*shrugs* But what can you do? Harry just wouldn't be Harry if he didn't try to sort things out. I'm sure Sev will be right there to try and stop him though, and once again I'm glad that thanks to said professor Harry won't have such a trying summer.
As for title ideas, if there’s some cannon event you plan on changing try to work it into the title. You know, like how you titled this ‘Better be Slytherin’ as Harry was placed in Slytherin?
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review! The Snape vs. Petunia fireworks should be fun as a start to Book Two . . . but I'll be working on Before the Dawn a bit before I start that one. As I mention up thread, I'm going to go with "Heir of Slytherin" for Book Two, since most everyone will think it's Harry, now that he's in Slytherin House *and* a Parselmouth.
I just loved this story!!! I found the new trio as much fun as that other one - and having different personalities in it spiced it up! Thank you for such a great story!
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| 18 Mar 2009 3:09 am
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| Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous)
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Amazing end to an amazing story. I like that you quoted the original story near the end to show that while there are differences, in the end, Harry's fate is quite similar.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 18 Mar 2009 2:11 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Thank you for a truly enjoyable story. Snape's unique way of looking after Harry, Harry's life in Slytherin etc add up to a very good read. Looking forward to year two.
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