Congratulations on finishing Year One! It's a fantastic story. Interesting switch on the end of year feast, and I liked how Severus was upset about winning, how that tied into his caring for Harry, and that Harry was able to recognize that, too.
I'm so looking forward to "Before the Dawn" and to "Year Two". Fraid I'm not much help with titles, though. I'm not good with them. I'd probably make it easy on myself and just call it "BBS: Year Two", lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I think I'm going to go with "The Heir of Slytherin" for Year Two because many people in "Chamber of Secrets" thought Harry was the heir, and now that he's actually in Slytherin House, even more will believe it. Maybe it'll even be true. :)