Harry’s developing a nice rapport with Teddy and Millie.
The plot thickens! Thanks for the great chapter.
Wow, a significant and intriguing departure from canon!
Oh, eclairs and cocoa sounds so good! I fear that I am years too late though, and I would review even without, given how marvelous this story is.
I love the way you’ve portrayed this classic scene. So nicely done.
A great aftermath, thank you.
It’s always heartening when first years are sent for comprehensive check ups, which should be standard practice across Houses! Snape (and even Pomfrey) were harsher than I expected, but I’m glad that Harry responded well. I’m looking forward to the Dursley visit!
Big thanks to Miri, with whom I wholeheartedly agree.
I love Harry’s admirable stoicism in the face of embarrassment. Thanks for another great chapter.
Snape is being positively evil!
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