Wow, jharad17, such a perfectly placed obstacle to completely avoid eliminating the possibility of that little sub-plot.
I love when, even reading something for the first time, you just watch as the author places a freaking mountain in front of an obstacle, easily solved by one person, but not by the other; just like 'Here competent person, but look at this. Shiny. Dastardly. Forget about this other thing over here that just really needs to happen'. Cause, you know, plot and like character development.
"Oh, wait! I got a present once...it was a clothes hanger."
Yep, that gave Snape the warm fuzzies.
😂
I should not be laughing at that.
Anyway, I love even though it's my second (or third) read through and I already know what's going to happen...sort of. Okay, really, I think I remember but I'm not sure until something happens that leads up to an event (like Gaius) and then I'm like, "Oh, yeah, that is this fic."
Snape's and the Baron's dynamic relationship is one of my favorite, besides Harry's and the Baron's.
Snape blushing in my mind's eye. 👌
So, I'm reading this on slow ffn and low and behold you say something about P&S and I'm like, "Wait?! Why am I reading it here then?!" So I'm over here now.
I love Harry's meltdown.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 02 Jun 2020 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: NoK (Signed)
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Okay! You win--Severus has redeemed himself for his previous behavior toward Harry. His own heart has broken open; he himself is truly beginning to feel the love he holds for Harry. Well done; I look forward to more.
I told you Severus was an asshole. Now at least he's facing up to it. It'll be interesting to see how you manage his change.
I really like this fic! I totally understand if you're not feeling like writing a sequel, but I'd definitely read it if you did! I grew very attached to Millicent's character and i loved the bloody baron! This was all well-written and full of great ideas!
I love this story. It's really fun to read a possible version of what would happen if Harry was sorted into Slytherin. I really hope you'll write the next years to
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