I look forward to seeing this actual list of rules! Keep the great writing coming!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 01 Sep 2007 5:03 am
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| Reviewer: HappeeGoLuckee (Anonymous)
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Oh PLEASE have Snape begin to understand Harry's problems and help him instead of tormenting him, PLEASE!!
Great chapter though, and I'm hoping that the Slytherins do something about Harry's Weasley Problem soon too, since Ron's being such a Prat!!
Thank you,
Scarlett
| Title: Chapter 5
| 01 Sep 2007 4:08 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Arg Sev is still being a total butt!!! but I dont mind XD 'cause he's totlly in character :) virtual hugs and kisses for the update!
~ Jamie M. Godfrey
Of course, it's a good chapter. It's very painful, in a way, to read Harry's inner tension and thoughts. I am wondering what Snape notices now, with Harry's hands shaking so badly, yet his face totally blank. And does Snape just look in his eyes? Or does he use legilimency to see anything? The way you describe Harry, I wonder if Snape would see anything, or if Harry buries it. Looking forward to seeing Snape's point of view of that meeting.
And what did Madame Pomfrey think?
Author's Response: All your questions, including the Madam Pmfrey one, will be answered in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Wow, what drama, I feel for Harry, really. What a mess, and it must be terrible. Poor child. Snape, well he seems cruel with the list, but he doesn't really know how mean it is, does he? Or maybe he doesn't care, maybe he still thinks Harry's a mini James menace. I think he might be starting to change his mind though...
Good chapter! thanks for the update! i couldn't help but notice that Snape didn't actually make Harry DO anything for detention. I suppose the list, and telling him how terrible his manners were was punishment enough.
Good chapter! Wow, Draco was being somewhat...civil. I wonder what all of those rules were...?
Wow(!!!)
I read the first section a while ago and wasn't too caught up, but now I'm addicted and seriously can't wait!!! Please make *my* holiday weekend exciting and add on more chapters!!!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 01 Sep 2007 12:09 am
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| Reviewer: anon. (Anonymous)
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I love this soo much. I cant wait for the next chapter...please MORE! MORE! MORE!!
I can't decide which of your stories I like reading the best! :)
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