| Title: Chapter 4
| 29 Aug 2007 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Tsukinoko1 (Anonymous)
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I believe Percy Weasley was a fifth year during Harry's first. Other than that it was great though.
Author's Response: Ack, you're right! I don't know what I was thinking. Hmmmm, maybe he skipped a year of potions? ;-) Thanks for the pointed, and the review!
I'm curious about the possibility of a home visit. Snape knows, I assume, that the relatives Harry lives with are his aunt and uncle. Snape knows Petunia. While he certainly might not know how she'd treat Harry (she spoils Dudley after all), he would know that Petunia resented Lily when they were children.
As regards detentions to Slytherins, I think you've got canon on your side there, since I believe that while canon tells us Snape didn't take points from his own House, we do find him giving Slytherins detention.
Nice job with nasty!Snape, but he is SO hard to read--realistic, I know, but painful. Poor Harry isn't going to get a break for a while, is he? But Snape makes home visits, eh? Nice to hear.
I think you're doing an amazing job with this. It's really a good story. It's definately one of my favorites. I like the separate points of view, as well. Keep up the good work!
You write at an absolutely astonishing speed. I love this story and I'm always glad to see any of your stories updated. Keep up the great work!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 28 Aug 2007 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter please update soon!!!
Extremely intriguing! I'm already a-quiver with anticipation of the moment when Snape Finds Out. His reaction is always so delicious. :-) Don't make us wait too much longer!
I like this story! Am looking forward to more! :)
Seems like Harry isn't having a very good time in his new House. Figures he'd get on Snape's bad side the first night. I guess it was inevitable. Hopefully Snape isn't going to be unreasonable all year long.
I like what you're doing with the lesser-known Slytherin students.
Great chapter. It really sets the scene. Ooh, and a third chapter already posted? Awesome!
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