I like it, think its going to be intresting. Keep up the great work and update again soon. LES
Well, well, I did wonder if you might do a story on this -- a couple of chapters back in Walk the Shadows and then a bit of discussion in the reviews... Anyway, it's a great idea. I'd love to see your oh-so-IC Snape deal with your very IC Harry in Slytherin. So Snape thought Harry would have done better in Slytherin, eh? I guess we'll find out.
Author's Response: Exactly. :-)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 21 Aug 2007 4:29 am
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| Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
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I like it! Your writing style shows through nicely. I can tell this won't be just another flat fanfic--it's only the intro and you've already displayed depth! Keep it up! =c)
Ha! No one care? Yeah, right -- this is starting off AWESOME!
I think it's really realistic/believable so far. I wonder what will happen between Harry and Ron now that they're not in the same house.
I really like AU fics like this, where everything starts off familiar/unchanged except for one detail... which then, of course, changes everything.
Poor little Harry, just wanting to belong and not very picky. I think that's realistic. I wonder what he'll feel toward the people who had put Slytherin down when speaking to him. So sad if Hagrid doesn't warm up to him -- there won't be a family photo album in Harry's future. Unless someone else puts it together for him.
The only minor mistake I saw was in the first paragraph (extra/unnecessary comma): "There's talent, -- my goodness"
It's a terrific start. If it's anything like your other stories it will be well worth the read.
Fantastic premise!! I can't wait to see where you go with this!!
Umm.... I'm also reading your other story "Walk the Shadows" which I haven't reviewed yet (sorry!) but I really love it - I cried for Harry and I hope Severus can get through to him and help him!!
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