You did a great job here, and I think your Harry is in-character. It's such a simple thing, but interesting anyway.
The only correction I suggest is writing out numbers ('two' instead of '2'). All single-digit numbers should be written out, while bigger numbers can be done either way. It helps your story to look more professional/mature overall.
If this was your first story, I'll look forward to anything else you'll write in the future.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I haven't replied to your review before now; I meant to but it slipped my mind as real life got a little crazy for awhile. Thank you for the tip on numbers, I've written a few fanfictions for other fandoms before but I'm still fairly new at this; especially for the Harry Potter fandom. Actually, this is my first Harry Potter fanfic. I'm always looking for little tips and tricks to make my writing flow better, feel more professional, or all-around improve it; and yours was a good one.
Thank you for that, and the review as well. Reviews always bring a smile to my face no matter what type of day I've been having.