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Reviews For Black Kitsune Raising Moon
I like this story, but I'm horribly confused. How can there be two Harrys? Is one of them a fake one on polyjuice? Is he in another dimension? Also I don't understand what a kitsune actually is. How big is the kitsune, because it keeps crawling up on peoples' laps. When did Alexander take classes and how can he do that if he's an animal? The last chapter had quite a bit of errors that the previous ones didn't. I'm not trying to be rude or anything. There are just somethings I'm not getting Author's Response: Alright, here's the snitch. Could you send me a line about some of the 'supposed' errors? Many of your questions concern important plot points that I refuse to reveal to you or anyone else beside my sound-board/beta. The kitsune bit will be properly explained in the next chapter in a section before the actually chapter. This is a mystery/supernatural fiction after all. I'm challenging all my veiwers to figure it out. The only question I can answer is about classes and Alexander. Remus and Alexander have living quarters in the dunegeons. They are not confined to the rooms assigned so they travel about the dunegeon between going outside, visiting teachers, and Snape. Thus students will see them during the day. This is Li Cruz, zooming off...
Anyway, as I was saying, if you are not a native English speaker, you need someone who has the time to figure out how to present your story while keeping the air of mystery you desire. I was also confused by the statement that Remus was no longer a werewolf. Was this the first we heard of this, or have I forgotten this? Author's Response: I'm an English Speaker. Whether I have a decent grasp of it has remained a mystery. And to the non-werewolf Remus question, Maybe, Maybe Not.... Actually, I thought I had stated or clearly implied that Remus is no longer a werewolf....Well, that could be because I removed a really badly written scene invovling Remus and Umbridge....I apologize for the mix-up....
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