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Reviews For The Silvanimus
I would love to see a sequel. I have a feeling Harry will have some problems with being sorted into Slytherin due to the prejudices of the Wizarding world but I'm still curious^^ One minor nit-pick though is you should watch your language a bit when your dealing with such a young character. Also the word ass really shouldn't be used in a spanking scene thats not sexual in nature or at least that's what I think. Both issues are small and they didn't hurt my enjoyment any. A very unique idea and a lovely story^^ ~PhoenixAlone |
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