This is very good. You should take tge Potter characters out, create your own (really just rename them, as they're rather au) and try for publishing. I'd buy your book.
| Title: Hogwarts
| 19 Jun 2011 6:49 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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what a thoughtful and creative story! thank you so much for this, and of course i'd love it if there were a sequel.... =)
| Title: Hogwarts
| 24 Nov 2009 9:56 pm
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| Reviewer: naru894 (Anonymous)
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this story was awesome!
thank you.
are you planning a secuel??? pleeeeaaasseeeeeee??*puppy/kitty eyes*
thanks anyways, Naru894
I must say, this was an excellent story. The idea was original and I liked how much thought you put into the process. I must say, though, that it'd be very interesting to see their relationship change as Harry becomes a teenager. (:
| Title: Trouble
| 05 Feb 2009 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Anonymous)
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Like your story, but don't use the word "ass". Try "bum" or something - Harry's too young and too well behaved to think of his butt that way, and the language is jarring.
It was a nice story. You kept Severus nicely in character. Usually writers turn him too mellow. Mila
SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!! Thats all
are you writing a sequel??
| Title: Hogwarts
| 13 Jan 2008 7:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Mistress DragonFlame (Anonymous)
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I can just imagine Severus snickering at his table, and the other professors giving him a dirty look.
Good story, though it's not really explained as to what the Protector's do in every day life.
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