Title: Hogwarts
| 03 Sep 2007 10:14 am
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Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous)
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Great fic, but how could you end it there? I want more.
Title: Hogwarts
| 02 Sep 2007 5:30 am
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Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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What a delightful story. So it will be Severus and Harry against the world, huh? Any story where the Dursley's are kicked out is fine with me. I hope you will tell us more about what Harry has been learning with his master. So many references, but little info about what a protector does and what he learns about how to do it.
Honestly, I thought this was a good story! Of course, my only concern complies with everyone else's about word-choice in chapter 9, but other than that, I really liked it. Are you thinking of writing a sequel? I think it would be interesting to see if Harry continues to see his and Snape's relationship as master/apprentice rather than father/son.
This was amazing! Will there be a sequel?
Title: Hogwarts
| 02 Sep 2007 3:19 am
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Reviewer: JEN77 (Anonymous)
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AWWWWW! tHE END!!! YOU HAVE A GREAT STORY GOING HERE. dON'T END IT NOW. tHINK OF ALL THE PLOTS YOU HAVE TO CHOOSE FROM AT HOGWARTS. tHE ONLY CRITIC i HAVE IS SUBSTITUTING THE WORDS BOTTOM, SEAT OR BACKSIDE INSTEAD OF ASS.
That was a truly great story. Do you have any plans for a sequel? Harry's life at Hogwarts or more training perhaps? Keep up the great writing and think sequel. LES
Title: Hogwarts
| 01 Sep 2007 4:22 pm
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Reviewer: PhoenixAlone (Anonymous)
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You're story has made me happy^^ I would love to see a sequel. I have a feeling Harry will have some problems with being sorted into Slytherin due to the prejudices of the Wizarding world but I'm still curious^^ One minor nit-pick though is you should watch your language a bit when your dealing with such a young character. Also the word ass really shouldn't be used in a spanking scene thats not sexual in nature or at least that's what I think. Both issues are small and they didn't hurt my enjoyment any. A very unique idea and a lovely story^^
~PhoenixAlone
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