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Reviews For Harry and the Elixir of Time
It's a very interesting concept to see Harry sorted into both Houses, and to see that he's comfortable in Slytherin already. I'm curious to see how that will affect Gryffindor/Slytherin relations in the days and years to come. Poor little Harry--he's had a rough beginning, but it sounds like he's found some supportive friends now, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
A couple of typos: "So why could a child" (would, not could) "and when you loose points" (lose, not loose) Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections - English is really difficult!
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