| Title: Quidditch
| 23 Sep 2007 11:22 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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I was just wondering when the time travel was coming into this story?
Author's Response: After Harry's first year at Hogwarts :-)
| Title: Quidditch
| 22 Sep 2007 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Every time I think that it's all been done, someone comes out with a totally new angle! This story is very interesting and your half Slyth-indor is way cool!!! What a way to give Harry lots of friends and uninte the school. You never did tell us why Snape was so mean to Harry unless the only point was to make Harry paranoid about Snape's feelings and motivation. You never even said if Harry gave the pass in! It would have been a great place for Snape to explain or for Harry to question. Yet, with all the damage you implied happened to Harry, for him to question an adult may be going too far. Is Snape Harry's favorite teacher because he spends more time with Harry than McGonagal? I always wondered how she handled being a full time teacher, Head of House and assistant Head Master. Will your Harry be more savy about the Wizarding world? If he has read all of his books before school really got going, then he has time to read ahead. Will the Slytherin's teach him about the wizarding culture so he is not so clueless about everything? What new surprises do you have in store for us? What a teriffic beginning.
I really love how you're taking the events of the first book, but having different characters be involved, like not having Harry and Hermione on the first trip to see Fluffy, and now having Draco in the Great Mountain Troll Battle. I think it's going to be important in unifying the Houses, and having characters from both Slytherin and Gryffindor become friends.
I loved seeing Severus care for Harry, and it's nice to see some good things happening for Harry like getting his broom and being talented at Quidditch. But what a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! I really appreciate them. Now, the cliffhanger is not too bad, is it? As I said before, this story is a time travel story.... So in order to do a time travel, Harry cannot die of a Quidditch accident before even going to the past, right? ;-) *evilly grin*
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