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Title: Holidays 15 Oct 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHHH... cliff hanger with out the next chapter suxs.... lol... this is really good so far... cant wait for u to repost...

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm really sorry ;-). Thanks for your review - I'm glad you like it, and I'm always updating on Fridays :-)
Title: Holidays 13 Oct 2007 4:23 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter! I loved it! It's good to see Harry making progress with his animagus form. It just might come in handy one of these days, hmm?

    I knew the poor little kid wasn't well though, and pneumonia can be quite serious. I'm glad Draco alerted Severus and that they were able to catch it early. Hopefully, Harry will make a full recovery. I'm sure he will if Severus has anything to say about it anyway.

    It is too bad in a way that Harry had to miss Christmas holidays with his friend, but I think it might just be better that he is spending it with Severus after all. The two of them can grow even closer now. And maybe Harry can visit Draco another time. Unless Lucius is still going to be a bad guy in your fic, and then Harry better just let Draco be a school friend.

    It was beautiful to see how simple things can make Harry so happy, like having a room of his own, even if it is just for two weeks, and decorating the Christmas tree. It's wonderful of Severus too, to go out of his way to make this Christmas a happy time for Harry.

    But when Harry was remembering his Christmases with the Dursleys, that was heartbreaking. That poor child, to be denied so much. I have a feeling that Severus and Minerva and the others will try extra hard to make things up to Harry now, and I can't wait to learn more about Severus' idea too.

    Can I ask a question? Will Severus and Harry ever address that lesson where Harry was late and Severus was a little harsh? Or is that all behind them now?

    And it is a time travel fic, didn't you say? That could be really interesting, to see how Severus, Lily, and James react to one another again. But I do hope that Harry and Severus will remain very close.

    I really love this story! You just updated and already I want more! Thank you for writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for this "Chapter of review" *lol*!

    Harry had to stay with Severus... I never intended to sent him to the Malfoys ;-). Lucius will only meet Harry once before they return to the past (while he is not good) - after they return to the future again, everything might be different...?!

    To your question, no, they won't address that particular lesson. I don't think Harry needs it anymore (after these holidays).

    Harry and Severus will remain very close - that I can promise (but nothing more, I won't tell you the story in advance ;-)

    Anyway thanks a lot for your review - it means a lot to me, especially as here at P&S I never get many reviews (in contrary to ffnet). Next chapter as usual on Friday (my beta-reader needs a week!)

     


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