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Reviews For Harry and the Elixir of Time
What a great image of Harry and Lily flying together...I can just imagine it. Now I'm off the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you liked it :-) Don't think Harry will be in too much trouble for once ... ;-)
Author's Response: No! I have already two baby Harry stories that I'm currently writing, so not in this story, I'm sorry!
I understand the need for longer chapters but having a charcter, especially one that is supposed to be 11 using so many words to say "Ron, i want to read because i wasn't allowed to at home, plus i'm feeling sick" is going to turn readers off. Try to cut out unnecessary words or change words that are used over three times in teh same paragraph. Good luck and please keep improving. Author's Response: As stupid as Ron is he needs a thourough explanation for everything ;-) That has nothing to do with making chapters longer - on the contrary: I am trying to keep my chapters short because I have to translate them into German (my native language) later - and it's more than annoying to translate a long chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, I wouldn't let my cute Harry fight a dragon now, would I? *way too dangerous* :-)
It was very clever of Harry to think about talking parseltongue to the dragon, and fortunate that she did understand it. I'm glad she was able to get her egg back and everything ended peacefully. You know, I hadn't really thought about how it might be when Harry and Salazar go back into the future, with their 'new' selves being affected by the new timeline. That could be really interesting. I almost think I'd be a little frightened if I were Harry. Great chapter again! Author's Response: Hmm. I think I'd be much more frightened if I were Severus as he is older and has much more experience. I can imagine that Harry just relies on him and doesn't think so much about everything.... Let's wait and see :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)
I really like your young Marauder characters in this story. They seem very real. Awesome poster for this story as well. Love it. Author's Response: So you have to admid it was a harmless point to stop here - better now than ten rows later ;-) Thanks for reading, reviewing, beta-ing etc. :-)
Author's Response: Remus really is too nice to have to suffer from such an illness (at least if Harry can cure it ;-) ) Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)
I will check out your group. Author's Response: Even as an adult, Sirius wasn't really grown up, was he? LOL
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I can understand your problem with reviews very well. I often have the same problem - I want to review but I don't know what to write. In that case anything is okay - just let me know that you read and accepted my chapter, 'hello' is all right too - just let me know that you're there. I've seen an author answering in a way like you described it, and I can't imagine how people can be so arrogant. In my opinion, the reader invests quite a time to read a chapter, and that's enough, he/she shouldn't have to invest more time to THINK about what to say in a review. Thanks :-) |
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