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Title: The Shrieking Shack 09 Mar 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the idea of the orphanage and school! It sounds like it will really work well for those children.

    What a great image of Harry and Lily flying together...I can just imagine it.

    Now I'm off the next chapter!
Title: Baby Times 02 Mar 2008 10:22 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I feel bad for baby Harry. I don't know what's wrong but sheesh, he's got troubles. I loved the end bit with Lily and Severus talking about their future selves raising Harry. LOL That was cute.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks - I'm glad you liked it :-)

    Don't think Harry will be in too much trouble for once ... ;-)

Title: Baby Times 02 Mar 2008 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was kinds hoping he would be a baby when he changed back, that would be fun to watch everyone interacting with him.

    Author's Response: No! I have already two baby Harry stories that I'm currently writing, so not in this story, I'm sorry!
Title: Halloween 25 Feb 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an interesting story but you might consider reading over it again. In some places it is way too wordy and redundant. You over explain things. This section for example "“No, Ron, but I have never had access to as many books as I would have liked to read, and now I have the chance, which I’m very happy about. Besides, I don’t feel very well yet; therefore, I want to go to bed, but I need something to read, as I won’t be able to sleep so early. Enough of a reason for borrowing a book from the library?”"
    I understand the need for longer chapters but having a charcter, especially one that is supposed to be 11 using so many words to say "Ron, i want to read because i wasn't allowed to at home, plus i'm feeling sick" is going to turn readers off. Try to cut out unnecessary words or change words that are used over three times in teh same paragraph. Good luck and please keep improving.

    Author's Response:

    As stupid as Ron is he needs a thourough explanation for everything ;-)

    That has nothing to do with making chapters longer - on the contrary: I am trying to keep my chapters short because I have to translate them into German (my native language) later - and it's more than annoying to translate a long chapter!

Title: Dragon Talks 18 Feb 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the creatures in your stories. They always seem so real and full of life. I love the momma dragon here and that Harry couldn't really fight him down all by himself..made him seem very human and young.

    Author's Response: Oh, I wouldn't let my cute Harry fight a dragon now, would I? *way too dangerous* :-)
Title: Dragon Talks 17 Feb 2008 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, teddy! I love that Harry and Salazar were able to cure Remus!

    It was very clever of Harry to think about talking parseltongue to the dragon, and fortunate that she did understand it. I'm glad she was able to get her egg back and everything ended peacefully.

    You know, I hadn't really thought about how it might be when Harry and Salazar go back into the future, with their 'new' selves being affected by the new timeline. That could be really interesting. I almost think I'd be a little frightened if I were Harry.

    Great chapter again!

    Author's Response:

    Hmm. I think I'd be much more frightened if I were Severus as he is older and has much more experience. I can imagine that Harry just relies on him and doesn't think so much about everything.... Let's wait and see :-)

    Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)

Title: The Wolves Cure 10 Feb 2008 9:08 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Always having to rush off. I know of course, where he's going but I was on pins and needles before I did! LOL

    I really like your young Marauder characters in this story. They seem very real. Awesome poster for this story as well. Love it.

    Author's Response:

    So you have to admid it was a harmless point to stop here - better now than ten rows later ;-)

    Thanks for reading, reviewing, beta-ing etc. :-)

Title: The Wolves Cure 09 Feb 2008 9:50 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I always felt sorry for Remus and what he had to go through because of his condition. I really liked how you figured out a way to hopefully cure his condition.

    Author's Response:

    Remus really is too nice to have to suffer from such an illness (at least if Harry can cure it ;-) )

    Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)

Title: The Wolves Cure 09 Feb 2008 4:52 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Thank you.Sirius just doesn't grow up, does he.

    I will check out your group.

    Author's Response: Even as an adult, Sirius wasn't really grown up, was he? LOL
Title: Holidays 28 Jan 2008 4:03 pm
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying all your fics, and I do prefer to read them on this site(although if you do decide to delete them I will continue to read af FF.net) I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed. I'm not a very articulate person, so my reviews tend to be things like "great chapter" or "good work". I have actually been put down by authors for leaving reviews like that. I actually had one author write on an AN that stated "if a reviewer can't take the time to write a review and not just an "Ooh, great chapter" then they don't even need to waste my time and they shouldn't expect an appreciative comment from me" This has happened more than once just not in the same words, so needless to say it has kida made me shy away from reviewing. Just know that I really love all of your fics and I will do my best to review them.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I can understand your problem with reviews very well. I often have the same problem - I want to review but I don't know what to write. In that case anything is okay - just let me know that you read and accepted my chapter, 'hello' is all right too - just let me know that you're there. I've seen an author answering in a way like you described it, and I can't imagine how people can be so arrogant. In my opinion, the reader invests quite a time to read a chapter, and that's enough, he/she shouldn't have to invest more time to THINK about what to say in a review. Thanks :-)

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