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Reviews For Harry and the Elixir of Time
Author's Response: No, because the Dark Mark only activates for the persons LV wants it to activate - and he doesn't know about Severus being a Death Eater. Harry's scar is a different matter... at least that's what I thought when I wrote this :-)
Great chapter! It was so much fun reading how Harry and Severus/Salazar (I understand your decision on his name, that could get confusing real fast!) arrived in the past and how Harry finally got to meet Lily and James. I'm anxious to see how things are going to develop for them all now, but I do hope Sirius' innocence can be proven. Once again, I really loved the chapter! Author's Response: Hello Kristeh, thanks for your review :-) If you have time to beta again and feel up to do so, please drop me a note :-)
I loved this chapter because we get to see Severus' plan for time travilling, and of course, the big shock about Harry's parentage. Great writing, as usual!
*rubs hands together* This is getting really good. I can't wait until the next chapter! ^_^
It was interesting to see Lucius and Draco come to visit. Boy, it's a good thing Harry learned Occlumency. He sure doesn't want Lucius Malfoy prying into his mind. I'm so happy to see that Draco is loyal to Harry rather than to his father. Of course, normally, I'd say family comes first, but not when your family is Lucius Malfoy! The whole Lockhart bit was amusing, too. I'm looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thanks, Kristeh, I'm glad you liked it - and thanks for beta-ing and for your encouragement :-) |
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