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Reviews For Harry and the Elixir of Time
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The game is not Gryffindor/Slytherin but Slytherin/Hufflepuff. However, it depends on the Slytherin score if Gryffindor or Slytherin will take the Quidditch Cup (for the school year). Sorry, I should have explained that better... Probably, Minerva and Severus both feel so close to Harry that they can't imagine that he would have problems coming to them?!
And Harry's wheezing and having trouble breathing? Is that just a slight relapse or is something going on with Harry? I'm glad Dumbledore agreed to let Harry stay with his classmates. The professors are right--Harry needs to stay with his friends and build his confidence. I think he'd have hated moving up a year, even if he is gifted. It's always nice to see Severus and Harry bonding, too. I think from what we see in "HBP" that Harry might have enjoyed Potions in canon, if Snape had been more agreeable. Looking forward to more!
I love it. Update Thanks Acanite Author's Response: A bit unbelievable that you love it (2 frogs) ;-)
He got some great presents, and I especially love the clothes that Severus gave him! I want some shirts like those! And I had to chuckle at the prank Harry and Severus played. It's nice to see that, as hard as his life has been, Harry still has that mischievous streak!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm really sorry ;-). Thanks for your review - I'm glad you like it, and I'm always updating on Fridays :-)
I knew the poor little kid wasn't well though, and pneumonia can be quite serious. I'm glad Draco alerted Severus and that they were able to catch it early. Hopefully, Harry will make a full recovery. I'm sure he will if Severus has anything to say about it anyway. It is too bad in a way that Harry had to miss Christmas holidays with his friend, but I think it might just be better that he is spending it with Severus after all. The two of them can grow even closer now. And maybe Harry can visit Draco another time. Unless Lucius is still going to be a bad guy in your fic, and then Harry better just let Draco be a school friend. It was beautiful to see how simple things can make Harry so happy, like having a room of his own, even if it is just for two weeks, and decorating the Christmas tree. It's wonderful of Severus too, to go out of his way to make this Christmas a happy time for Harry. But when Harry was remembering his Christmases with the Dursleys, that was heartbreaking. That poor child, to be denied so much. I have a feeling that Severus and Minerva and the others will try extra hard to make things up to Harry now, and I can't wait to learn more about Severus' idea too. Can I ask a question? Will Severus and Harry ever address that lesson where Harry was late and Severus was a little harsh? Or is that all behind them now? And it is a time travel fic, didn't you say? That could be really interesting, to see how Severus, Lily, and James react to one another again. But I do hope that Harry and Severus will remain very close. I really love this story! You just updated and already I want more! Thank you for writing! Author's Response: Thanks for this "Chapter of review" *lol*! Harry had to stay with Severus... I never intended to sent him to the Malfoys ;-). Lucius will only meet Harry once before they return to the past (while he is not good) - after they return to the future again, everything might be different...?! To your question, no, they won't address that particular lesson. I don't think Harry needs it anymore (after these holidays). Harry and Severus will remain very close - that I can promise (but nothing more, I won't tell you the story in advance ;-) Anyway thanks a lot for your review - it means a lot to me, especially as here at P&S I never get many reviews (in contrary to ffnet). Next chapter as usual on Friday (my beta-reader needs a week!)
Author's Response: Don't worry - you will get the next chapter as usual on Friday! Thanks for your review, I'm glad you like the story :-)
Author's Response: Oh my... poor Harry ... lol :-)
Of course Harry is going to practise on his own, how could he resist? I'm a little worried though, that he doesn't seem to be completely healthy and doesn't seem to realize it. He's so excited about his magic that he's pushing himself a bit, but I hope he'll be all right. I am glad to see the professors and Dumbledore take care of Harry and be protective of him, not just let him flounder on his own. It sounds like Harry is going to have an interesting Christmas at the Malfoys, too. Author's Response: With the Malfoys? Hmmm... let's see. Yes, his health is a bit of a problem... Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it :-)
Author's Response: Oh no, don't curse me - I'm not that evil ;-) I promise I won't kill Harry :-) |
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