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Title: A Strange First Day at Hogwarts 14 Sep 2007 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! It's wonderful to see Harry getting the care he needs, and settling in to life at Hogwarts.

    Of course he had to be disappointed and a bit nervous about missing classes right at the beginning, but Hermione is the best person possible to get notes from, and it sounds like Severus isn't going to let Harry get behind.

    How nice that Harry is making friends and feeling more comfortable about being in both Gryffindor and Slytherin, and that Severus is being so encouraging and helpful. It's such a shame that he couldn't have seen the 'real' Harry in canon.

    Author's Response:

    hi Kristeh,

    thanks for your reviews! I'm glad that you like my story so far :-)

Title: A Surprising Sorting 14 Sep 2007 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, this story sounds great! I particularly like how Severus was able to be open-minded enough to see that his preconceived notions about Harry were wrong, and to identify and sympathize once he suspected that Harry was abused.

    It's a very interesting concept to see Harry sorted into both Houses, and to see that he's comfortable in Slytherin already. I'm curious to see how that will affect Gryffindor/Slytherin relations in the days and years to come.

    Poor little Harry--he's had a rough beginning, but it sounds like he's found some supportive friends now, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: A Surprising Sorting 02 Sep 2007 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Good beginning. This sounds like it will be a good story. I can't wait to find out what was under the glamour.

    A couple of typos:

    "So why could a child" (would, not could)

    "and when you loose points" (lose, not loose)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections - English is really difficult!
Title: A Surprising Sorting 02 Sep 2007 5:26 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great start, going to be an intersting one. Keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES

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