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Reviews For Harry and the Elixir of Time
Of course he had to be disappointed and a bit nervous about missing classes right at the beginning, but Hermione is the best person possible to get notes from, and it sounds like Severus isn't going to let Harry get behind. How nice that Harry is making friends and feeling more comfortable about being in both Gryffindor and Slytherin, and that Severus is being so encouraging and helpful. It's such a shame that he couldn't have seen the 'real' Harry in canon. Author's Response: hi Kristeh, thanks for your reviews! I'm glad that you like my story so far :-)
It's a very interesting concept to see Harry sorted into both Houses, and to see that he's comfortable in Slytherin already. I'm curious to see how that will affect Gryffindor/Slytherin relations in the days and years to come. Poor little Harry--he's had a rough beginning, but it sounds like he's found some supportive friends now, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
A couple of typos: "So why could a child" (would, not could) "and when you loose points" (lose, not loose) Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections - English is really difficult!
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