| Title: Walls and Bridges
| 23 Sep 2007 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wow, awesome story. I love the very different occulmency lessons and Snape's struggle to come to term with Harry. But why hasn't Harry angst over being a child of rape, even if it saved his mothers life? Also shouldn't Harry have warned his friends not to speak about this as if would jeopardize Snape's spying? After all Harry should realize Ron isn't the most discrete of persons.
Good chapter although it seems like Harry is learning to shield his mind a bit fast. Perhaps he should still need lessons in maintaining his defences. Hope you add another chapter soon!
| Title: Walls and Bridges
| 23 Sep 2007 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: jljaina (Anonymous)
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This is looking really good so far. I really hope Snape comes around to face Harry in a better fashion. at least he got a bit of a wake up call to Harry's life.
I can't believe that Severus still won't face the facts about what happened to Harry, and is ignoring him when it's so obvious that they both want the same thing. Great chapter, keep up the good work, and please update again soon. LES
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