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Title: At the Beginning 04 Feb 2024 1:03 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that your story has a sequel! Tobias is such a compelling character.
Title: At the Beginning 20 Feb 2019 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start to the story thank you
Title: At the Beginning 25 Sep 2015 5:17 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    lol! I never had the pre-term discussions pertaining to expected grades, however, I always had the 'I'm disappointed your grades aren't as good as your brother's grades' talk. He's a genius and I barely could make Average..... The shoes I had to fill. (And I was the oldest! by several years!) oi. lol.

    --his
Title: At the Beginning 27 Jan 2008 9:57 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I didn't think it was dull at all. Poor Harry adjusting to the regime of a strict parent, and Severus getting his jollies from watching the show, is hilarious.

    "...food for the castle." I didn't understand this reference at all. (?)

    Severus's (shouldn't have the s on the end)

    But...you have stopped ending "Dursleys" with a possessive! Hooray!

    overbroad (overboard)

    caus(u)ally;

    its (it's) 10 or nothing

    hadn't lock(ed) his door

    Author's Response:

    Glad you didn't think it was dull. I feel for Harry, but Severus is absolutely hilarious.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: At the Beginning 08 Sep 2007 4:29 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! a sequel, I love this story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: At the Beginning 04 Sep 2007 9:38 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Tobias is kinda cool, but I do think he's way too pushy with Harry. After all, while he doesn't seem to forget that Harry never had anyone looking after him, he apparently does fail to remember that Harry also never had to live up to any expectations regarding schoolwork and is used to an extreme (and unhealthy) amount of freedom there. What he's trying to do is like stuffing a cat that's used to roam outside on its own in a small basket to take it to the vet. It will become skittish and take forever to trust again.

    Author's Response:

    Tobias was a captian in the Navy. He's used to giving order and them being obeyed. Eventually, he'll start to loosen up a bit, but for now he's just going with what he knows.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: At the Beginning 04 Sep 2007 8:00 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovin' it.

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: At the Beginning 04 Sep 2007 6:39 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start so far! Harry is going to have an interesting year with his father and brother at school with him and I'm sure that will eventually drive him slightly insane. Excellent beginning and hopefully the next chapter will come out soon!

    Author's Response:

    Insanity is a nice place to be. I've been enjoying it for years. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. The next chapter is on its way.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: At the Beginning 04 Sep 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    It wasn't dull... I really liked it. It made me laugh. Awww... poor harry, he's probabbly testing Tobias's limits. I wonder if it was Eileen who punished the Dursleys... I doubt she's completely out of the picture.

    Author's Response:

    Eileen...well, you'll just have to wait and see. Glad you didn't think the chapter was dull.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: At the Beginning 04 Sep 2007 4:46 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    haha cute first chapter.

    though... that's alot of money for good grades!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. Money is a great motivator.

    Thanks for the review.


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