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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
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"...food for the castle." I didn't understand this reference at all. (?) Severus's (shouldn't have the s on the end) But...you have stopped ending "Dursleys" with a possessive! Hooray! overbroad (overboard) caus(u)ally; its (it's) 10 or nothing hadn't lock(ed) his door Author's Response: Glad you didn't think it was dull. I feel for Harry, but Severus is absolutely hilarious. Thanks for the review!
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Author's Response: Tobias was a captian in the Navy. He's used to giving order and them being obeyed. Eventually, he'll start to loosen up a bit, but for now he's just going with what he knows. Thanks for the review.
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Author's Response: Insanity is a nice place to be. I've been enjoying it for years. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. The next chapter is on its way. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Eileen...well, you'll just have to wait and see. Glad you didn't think the chapter was dull. Thanks for the review.
though... that's alot of money for good grades! Author's Response: Thanks. Money is a great motivator. Thanks for the review. |
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