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Title: As the World Turns 04 Feb 2024 1:17 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oof, so cold, Serenity. I hoped for better from her.
Title: As the World Turns 21 Feb 2019 9:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear very sad.
Title: As the World Turns 13 Jun 2013 4:16 pm
Reviewer: furrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I'm beginning to like Serenity again.

    I would say I do hope Serenity to come around, I know from personal experience that women like Serenity are the ones that eventually become mothers like Eileen if forced.

    Nice chapter, indeed.
Title: As the World Turns 28 Jan 2008 8:20 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    God, I hate the abbreviation "Mione". It would be pronounced "Moi-ney", which is not very likely, and is NEVER found in the books.

    Serenity seems to be Eileen without the refreshing honesty. It is only too likely that Severus would choose a woman like his mother...psychologically speaking. They do.

    Filus (Filius)

    then (than) how he entered

    claming (calming)

    his oldest (older) son

    cold(-)hearted.

    Author's Response:

    I tried to draw as many possible connections as possible between Eileen and Serentiy.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: As the World Turns 07 Oct 2007 11:28 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Tiffany,

    I'm enjoying how the sequel is going, I can't wait for the next chapter, please email me at: elizabeth12@hughes.net as soon as you update.

    I have to say, I'm deeply dissapointed in Serenity, I thought poor Sevy had finally found someone to love, but now that hope is dashed. I'm curious if the child is going to be a boy or girl. I hope it's a girl personaly, there needs to be a girl in that family. hehe. I wish I could jump into you're story and help poor Severus through his problems. I'll just have to pray for him ^_^

    ttyl,

    Beth

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying the sequel. If you want to be alerted for the next chapter you can add me to your favorites on this site or if you go to fanfiction.net (same pen name and title).

    Serenity...at first I really liked her, but as the story went on...I had to get rid of her and what better way to do it then to have her turn into Eileen. (I'm evil aren't I.)

     You'll have to wait and see if about the baby.

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres.

Title: As the World Turns 26 Sep 2007 1:47 am
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    So far this one has started off as well as the last one. I can't wait to see how you further develop your characters. I can't wait to see Serenity's actions when she realises that what she's doing is almost exactly what Eileen did to Harry; handing him over to someone and walking away without looking back. Excellent start. More, if you please.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for the review and an update is in the near future.

Title: As the World Turns 25 Sep 2007 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What did Harry do in class? I was raised in a military household and called my father sir acknowledging orders, etc, however, once I reached the age of adulthood that stopped. He acknowledged me as an adult and knew I both honored and respected him as he did me and that as an adult who was not under his "command" I did not have to call him sir. I find it extremely odd for Severus, a grown man whose lived a life of his own, to continue to call his father sir constantly. No father would expect this except a nut and I can see no grown child accepting this except one that has been abused and conditioned. It is one thing to except obedience and respect from a child and another to constantly demand it from those around you. Respect is earned! You make Tobias out to be slightly crazed, a parent you could easily run away from. You would think he would have learned from the mistakes he made with Severus. A great story otherwise. Glad to see Harry bucking against suddenly having a parent. Hope you leave Sev as someone he can turn to.

    Author's Response:

    You'll have to wait to see what Harry did in potions class. As for Severus calling Tobias 'sir' I tried to make it sound as though he were reverting back a bit. Normally he wouldn't call his dad sir all the time, just upon occasion, but he's in a very uncomfortable situation all of a sudden and he doesn't know what to do exactly. On one hand he wants to tell his dad about Serenity, but is still confused enough about the situation enought that can't just walk up to his father and go "oh, and dad, just thought you should know, you're going to be a grandfather. Toodles." I've tried to present Severus as a very reserved person who has a hard time opening up even to those that he loves. One way to do this was to have Severus suddenly start acting more formal around his father.

    I hope that clears up any confusion on Severus's formality. I do hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story.

    Thanks for the review.

     DaughterOfAres

Title: As the World Turns 24 Sep 2007 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that you put in the bit from Serenity's point of view (compairing herself to Eileen). I disagree with her because at least Eileen DID try, but meh. I guess the Snapes are destind to have sucky luck with women. Poor little Harry should just turn gay and save himself the trouble. O_~

    Anywho, GREAT fic hun! It's rare that the sequals are as good as the originals but this is shaping up to be another enthralling piece of work! Kudos. ^-^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I'm glad you like the scene with Serenity I figured people needed a reason for her actions even if the reason, from a logical person's standpoint, is insane. The Snapes luck is destined to get better eventually...:).

    Thanks again, I'm glad this fic is looking as good as the other one.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: As the World Turns 24 Sep 2007 2:04 am
Reviewer: katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the first story, and I think this one is good too.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them. I hope this story doesn't disappoint.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: As the World Turns 23 Sep 2007 7:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm wondering what happened in Harry's potion class that landed him in detention. Serenity makes me mad when she has absolutly no feelings for the child growing in her. Anwyays, a most ecxellent chapter like usual and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More about Harry in potions class coming soon. I'm actually glad you're mad at Serenity, because not only would I be concerned if you liked her, but it also means I wrote her well enough to evoke feelings in my readers. A new update is on its way.

    Thanks for reviewing.


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