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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
I would say I do hope Serenity to come around, I know from personal experience that women like Serenity are the ones that eventually become mothers like Eileen if forced. Nice chapter, indeed.
Serenity seems to be Eileen without the refreshing honesty. It is only too likely that Severus would choose a woman like his mother...psychologically speaking. They do. Filus (Filius) then (than) how he entered claming (calming) his oldest (older) son cold(-)hearted. Author's Response: I tried to draw as many possible connections as possible between Eileen and Serentiy. Thanks for the review!
I'm enjoying how the sequel is going, I can't wait for the next chapter, please email me at: elizabeth12@hughes.net as soon as you update. I have to say, I'm deeply dissapointed in Serenity, I thought poor Sevy had finally found someone to love, but now that hope is dashed. I'm curious if the child is going to be a boy or girl. I hope it's a girl personaly, there needs to be a girl in that family. hehe. I wish I could jump into you're story and help poor Severus through his problems. I'll just have to pray for him ^_^ ttyl, Beth Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the sequel. If you want to be alerted for the next chapter you can add me to your favorites on this site or if you go to fanfiction.net (same pen name and title). Serenity...at first I really liked her, but as the story went on...I had to get rid of her and what better way to do it then to have her turn into Eileen. (I'm evil aren't I.) You'll have to wait and see if about the baby. Thanks for the review. DaughterOfAres.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review and an update is in the near future.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait to see what Harry did in potions class. As for Severus calling Tobias 'sir' I tried to make it sound as though he were reverting back a bit. Normally he wouldn't call his dad sir all the time, just upon occasion, but he's in a very uncomfortable situation all of a sudden and he doesn't know what to do exactly. On one hand he wants to tell his dad about Serenity, but is still confused enough about the situation enought that can't just walk up to his father and go "oh, and dad, just thought you should know, you're going to be a grandfather. Toodles." I've tried to present Severus as a very reserved person who has a hard time opening up even to those that he loves. One way to do this was to have Severus suddenly start acting more formal around his father. I hope that clears up any confusion on Severus's formality. I do hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story. Thanks for the review. DaughterOfAres
Anywho, GREAT fic hun! It's rare that the sequals are as good as the originals but this is shaping up to be another enthralling piece of work! Kudos. ^-^ Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the scene with Serenity I figured people needed a reason for her actions even if the reason, from a logical person's standpoint, is insane. The Snapes luck is destined to get better eventually...:). Thanks again, I'm glad this fic is looking as good as the other one. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them. I hope this story doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More about Harry in potions class coming soon. I'm actually glad you're mad at Serenity, because not only would I be concerned if you liked her, but it also means I wrote her well enough to evoke feelings in my readers. A new update is on its way. Thanks for reviewing. |
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