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Title: Close Encounters 04 Feb 2024 1:22 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ack, this new danger is creepy! I hope they beat it soon.
Title: Close Encounters 21 Feb 2019 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thing is very spooky more so as we don’t know what it is. I love the Severus Tobias interactions thank you
Title: Close Encounters 29 Jan 2008 9:42 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sounds like a Vampire, except it goes for the death of a thousand cuts...the 'caller' bit sounds like a basilisk...

    The interactions between Tobias and his sons are very well done.

    Severus's (Severus')

    high(-)pitched, overly(-)cheerful

    over reacted (overreacted)

    dad bid (bade)

    older mans (man's) eyes

    His fathers (father's) office

    sipped on his tea (sipped his tea)

    curtained(-)off

    to be lead (led) off

    youngest (younger)

    Author's Response:

    No, not a vampire. You'll find out in a few chapters.

    Thanks for the reveiw!

Title: Close Encounters 13 Jan 2008 8:10 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it whens theres monsters in Hogwarts! It adds danger and excitement! I'm angry at Serenity. Grrr.

    Author's Response:

    lol.

    Monsters are fun to play with. :)

    Don't worry I'm angry at Serenity too, but that probably a good thing.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Close Encounters 01 Oct 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, lots of drama today. This thing roaming Hogwarts was what went to the Dursley's? I'm going to have to go reread that part but it's definately intriguing. What could be "feeding" on people? GULP! And Severus, you're making him so believable. The conflicting emotions of impeding parenthood are terrible even for a planned child but the single, grumpy father of an unexpected child can't be having an easy time of it. And I loved how father and brother hugged Harry like that. Perfect!

    Author's Response:

    Drama is fun. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm really tired and just got off a 13 hour day at work so this review response is horrible. Anyway thank you so much for the review and a new chapter is on its way.

    Thanks again.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope the Toad doesn't hurt Harry with his Dad in the castle. This chapter was good, poor Sev I think he'll be a good dad.

    Author's Response:

    You'll have to wait and see about Harry and Umbridge. I'm glad you liked the chapter and a new update should be up soon.

    Thanks for reviewing.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 6:12 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how you continue to keep Harry in character. This is one of most original Harry/Sev/Tobias stories I've ever read. It's interesting how in each chapter you juxtapose the brothers' relationships with their father.

    Thanks for updating! Can't wait to see what's next :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Honestly when I first thought of writing this I didn't think it was that orginal, but people keep telling me it is so...*shrugs*. You don't have long to wait to see what happens next and I'm sure you'll like the next chapter. *evil grin*

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 5:39 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon.

    Thanks for reviewing.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    *Holds high powered torch close to chest as she glances aroung the room as she reviews*

    Poor Tobias. I can almost feel the frustration he must be dealing with. Tee hee. Will Harry help Sevy with 'Baby sitting' duty? Maybe he could 'currupt' the new little Snape with 'Gryffindor-ness' and really annoy Sev. ^v^

    So the beastie has made an appearance. Ooooo. This is gettin' GOOD! ^-^

    Author's Response:

    *squeel* Really glad you like it. I must say I got some inspiration from you in....thing...department. I can assure you that Harry will have his turn with the next addition to the family *rubs palms together and grins evilly*

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 11:44 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    eek how scary and suspensful! Cant wait to read the next chap ^__^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter will be up soon.

    Thanks for the review.

    DaugherOfAres


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