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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
Author's Response: Thank you! LOL. I think you're the only person who caught on to my little trick about the baby. I was actually trying to mislead people into believing it would be a boy. :D Thanks for the reivew! :D
Then, "In fact you should be mortified." In this chapter from Tobias to Severus. I'm pretty sure you didn't want Tobias telling Snape he should be embarrassed. I mean it's possible...but unlikely. You probably want terrified. Other than that, excellent work!
Tobias seems to be teaching Muggle Studies, not History of Magic. Nice ending. were being subtlety (subtlely) encouraging youngest (younger) son got to(o) close to you mortified (I think you mean terrified) how good of a man (how good a man) Author's Response: I had to add that line about him having girls. I've wanted to put it in since the begining, but couldn't find a place till now. :) Thanks for the review!
Two chapter in one week is very good! I hardly ever get two chapters in a month! I know it's horrible. :( Author's Response: Personally I can't wait until the baby's born and I'm the author. I have some great moments planned out. (grins evily) And don't worry the updates will, unfortunatly become more sporatic. :( Thanks for the review!
Another part of the chapter I thought worked well was Tobias' class. You didn't linger to show either young wizard's reaction but having Ron be the one to reason out a solution for "Minister Malfoy" was good planning on Tobias' part...and yours! The interplay between the students in that class is nice to see and it would be great to see it spread beyond that classroom as a counter to Umbridge's poison. Overall, a really satisfying chapter. Author's Response: Harry, won't be in trouble, I promise. I'm really glad you enjoy Tobias's classes. If I ever become a teach that is how I would run my class, or at least very similar. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the wonderful review. DaughterOfAres
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Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the talk. As for Harry's motive you'll have to wait and see. :) Thanks for the review DaughterOfAres
Love it... perfect 'TV moment'. Author's Response: I can't take all the credit, Harry listening in on the conversation was more my beta's doing then mine. Thanks for reviewing DaughterOfAres |
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