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Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 04 Feb 2024 1:31 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a lovely father son conversation. I especially appreciated the line about every minute put into a child, good or bad, pays out in the end. True words of wisdom.
Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 21 Feb 2019 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter thank you
Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 07 Feb 2011 2:44 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story so far. I can not understand how cold Eileen and Serenity are, to abandon their children. I am glad that Severus wants to take care of his child. I want to know what the monster is that attacked the Slytherin girl and killed the house-elves. One question though, why are Severus and Tobias referring to the baby as a he? It is too early to know.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    LOL. I think you're the only person who caught on to my little trick about the baby. I was actually trying to mislead people into believing it would be a boy. :D

    Thanks for the reivew! :D

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 30 May 2009 2:39 am
Reviewer: Zazzle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story! Just two quick critiques so I can get back to reading. Quite vs. Quiet, Quiet as in silence, Harry had to be quiet as he crept down the hall. Quite, as in more so, Harry was quite sure about what he'd seen.

    Then, "In fact you should be mortified." In this chapter from Tobias to Severus. I'm pretty sure you didn't want Tobias telling Snape he should be embarrassed. I mean it's possible...but unlikely. You probably want terrified.

    Other than that, excellent work!
Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 30 Jan 2008 7:20 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If Tobias things he should have had girls, he's never met a hormonal one.

    Tobias seems to be teaching Muggle Studies, not History of Magic.

    Nice ending.

    were being subtlety (subtlely) encouraging

    youngest (younger) son

    got to(o) close to you

    mortified (I think you mean terrified)

    how good of a man (how good a man)

    Author's Response:

    I had to add that line about him having girls. I've wanted to put it in since the begining, but couldn't find a place till now. :)

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 13 Jan 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's going to be an uncle! lol :)

    Two chapter in one week is very good! I hardly ever get two chapters in a month! I know it's horrible. :(

    Author's Response:

    Personally I can't wait until the baby's born and I'm the author. I have some great moments planned out. (grins evily)

    And don't worry the updates will, unfortunatly become more sporatic. :(

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 04 Oct 2007 4:50 am
Reviewer: Arwensong (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely job with the conversation between Severus and Tobias. Every word of it seemed just right, without coming across as too prepared...and the break into excitement at the end was great also. I loved how Harry got excited too and hope that he isn't reprimanded for overhearing...this should be a moment when he is made to feel like part of the family with his Dad and brother.

    Another part of the chapter I thought worked well was Tobias' class. You didn't linger to show either young wizard's reaction but having Ron be the one to reason out a solution for "Minister Malfoy" was good planning on Tobias' part...and yours! The interplay between the students in that class is nice to see and it would be great to see it spread beyond that classroom as a counter to Umbridge's poison.
    Overall, a really satisfying chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Harry, won't be in trouble, I promise. I'm really glad you enjoy Tobias's classes. If I ever become a teach that is how I would run my class, or at least very similar.

    Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the wonderful review.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 04 Oct 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks
Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 03 Oct 2007 10:24 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for responding to my review but from I suggest you go back and reread your previous story as Sev didn't just start being formal with his father. You had him doing that from the start even before he was deaged with Harry. Loved the Sev/Tobias talk. What is Harry's motive for not telling his dad about the blood quill?

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed the talk. As for Harry's motive you'll have to wait and see. :)

    Thanks for the review

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 03 Oct 2007 4:36 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    *L* Harry!

    Love it... perfect 'TV moment'.

    Author's Response:

    I can't take all the credit, Harry listening in on the conversation was more my beta's doing then mine.

    Thanks for reviewing

    DaughterOfAres


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