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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
Great chapter! Author's Response: *squeel* Yay! someone understood what I was going for in that scene! *smooths down shirt and readjust hair while calmly sitting back down to type* Anyway, I'm glad you liked that scene, at first I was going to have it go in a completely different direction, then I was going to have Sev. yell at Harry, but somehow I typed this instead and...*smiles* I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again! Thanks for the review! DaughterofAres
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like the story. I promise to update ASAP. Also, as everyone will find out latter, its not that Tobias doesn't want to talk about his past, just that he can't. Thanks for the review! DaughterOfAres
Honestly, I am surprised Harry is still standing for it, but I guess the thrill of having a family that doesn't beat him is too exciting for him to realize that he is allowed to be his own person and that when the Wizarding World forces a destiny on him, he is allowed a say in how he fulfills it. What do they plan to do, keep him locked up with his schoolbooks and then put him under an Imperius to finish off Voldemort in exactly the way they want him to? They don't seem to be above it, judging from earlier in your stories. Author's Response: I realize I'm leaving Harry out a lot for now, but he will come into play more soon as well Tobias and Severus's actions towards him. I'm trying to portray Tobias as a loving and wise character, but he doesn't know everything and his experiences with raising Severus aren't helping much with Harry. (I hinted about that in the last story) As for Severus, he doesn't know anything. At least when it comes to children and especially his younger brother. As the story progresses all three will learn very valuable lessons. I can't say any more then that without giving the story away. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the story. DaughterOfAres |
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