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Title: Purple People Eater 20 Dec 2007 4:35 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, man, the creature is scary!
    Great chappie, I especially like the part where Harry throws the tantrum. It just seems so unlike him and then so like him at the same time, you know?
    I also like the part when Harry was cleaning the cauldrons and he stops and Snape says,
    "I'm flooing dad."
    It just sounds so much like a brother would do.
    "I'm telling daddy on you!"
    Even though Sev's a lot more mature than that.
    Hehe.
    Also I was bursting into sporadic giggles twenty minutes after reading, because of the, ""All right! All right! Look I'm scrubbing!"
    lol. very funny.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    -Elise

    Author's Response:

    I've come to a decision: after I write a chapter all the scenes that I don't think are very good, I'm leaveing since those are the ones people seem to like the most. I almost deleted the entire detention scene and don't really know why I didn't, but it seems that everyone who review likes it. *shrugs*

    Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Purple People Eater 20 Dec 2007 1:32 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I tried to go to your bio page but it would only go to s.216.photobucket.

    Rats

    Author's Response:

    I don't know why. hmm.... *shruggs helplessly*

Title: Purple People Eater 20 Dec 2007 1:26 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the picture. That is just how I visualized Tobias.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you found you like it. I love myself.

    Thanks!

Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 11:46 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 8:49 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. The creature - might it be something from Tolkein??

    Gee Sev, a 35 year old saying "I'm going to tell Dad." - Loved it.

    Author's Response:

    Tolkein...hmm...you'll see. (furiously scratches the idea down for other things)

    In his defense he didn't actually say: "I'm telling" but having him imply it was to hard to resist.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely loved the "I'm flooing dad" part. Great job with this chapter! And Harry's tantrum... I could so see that happening.

    Thanks for the update :)

    Author's Response:

    Rest assured Harry will throw several more tantrums before the story is over.

    I couldn't resist the "I'm telling" thing. *sigh* they both have some growing up to do. :)

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I see Severus and Tobias still haven't worked out that family and school should remain seperate issues when dealing with Harry. It would, of course, help if Harry acted a bit more mature but then again, after years of being expected to solve everything, it must be very frustrating to be constantly left out.

    Author's Response:

    Harry is new to the whole idea of family so he's testing his boundries. He's not ready to do anything that will get him in a lot of trouble (yet), but unconsiously he's trying to see how far he can push his father and even his brother so he acts immature at times.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 7:10 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Its killing me trying to think of what this creature could be. Can you give any hints? It is something you made up or an actual creature that JKR created? Keep up the awesome writing and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Its not completely original, but its not from JKR either. Thats all I'll say. :)

    Thanks for the review, and I'll update as soon as possible.

Title: Purple People Eater 17 Dec 2007 6:57 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Ut oh, the creature is ready, it's killing, McGonnagal is missing, Severus is being a bratty older brother (what else is new?) and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment! Good chapter, sure keeps us wondering...

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter will be very interesting I promise.

    Thanks for the review!


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