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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
Great chappie, I especially like the part where Harry throws the tantrum. It just seems so unlike him and then so like him at the same time, you know? I also like the part when Harry was cleaning the cauldrons and he stops and Snape says, "I'm flooing dad." It just sounds so much like a brother would do. "I'm telling daddy on you!" Even though Sev's a lot more mature than that. Hehe. Also I was bursting into sporadic giggles twenty minutes after reading, because of the, ""All right! All right! Look I'm scrubbing!" lol. very funny. Can't wait for the next chapter! -Elise Author's Response: I've come to a decision: after I write a chapter all the scenes that I don't think are very good, I'm leaveing since those are the ones people seem to like the most. I almost deleted the entire detention scene and don't really know why I didn't, but it seems that everyone who review likes it. *shrugs* Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!
Rats Author's Response: I don't know why. hmm.... *shruggs helplessly*
Author's Response: I'm glad you found you like it. I love myself. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Gee Sev, a 35 year old saying "I'm going to tell Dad." - Loved it. Author's Response: Tolkein...hmm...you'll see. (furiously scratches the idea down for other things) In his defense he didn't actually say: "I'm telling" but having him imply it was to hard to resist. Thanks for the review!
Thanks for the update :) Author's Response: Rest assured Harry will throw several more tantrums before the story is over. I couldn't resist the "I'm telling" thing. *sigh* they both have some growing up to do. :) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Harry is new to the whole idea of family so he's testing his boundries. He's not ready to do anything that will get him in a lot of trouble (yet), but unconsiously he's trying to see how far he can push his father and even his brother so he acts immature at times. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! Its not completely original, but its not from JKR either. Thats all I'll say. :) Thanks for the review, and I'll update as soon as possible.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter will be very interesting I promise. Thanks for the review! |
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