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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
As for the moment between Sev and Harry, dear, it was wonderful. It takes a bit for me to like Harry and Sev as brothers; I was most wary at first when I started reading the first fic in this 'verse. I have to say, though, that I absolutely love it. They actually act like brothers and Harry is allowed to be an insecure teen without going overboard and acting like a bit of a brat when he wants to. All in all, this is a great story, and I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story and that I was able to draw you into another genre of Harry and Sev fics. The scene between the two brothers worried me, no so much because Harry, but because of Severus. I wasn't sure if I had shown him as letting his shields down enough to confide in his brother. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! DaughterofAres
Is it like a "spook"? My husband Randy and I were in the Navy and were in the intelligence operations and we were called "spooks Author's Response: Yes, a murk is similar to a spook. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait till the baby comes either!
(Reading other reviews for this chapter) I'm really glad that you kept in the baby from "baby brother" too. It does make sense that Severus would be so angry and disraught that he wouldn't care much what was coming out of his mouth. But those last lines between Harry and Severus...writing fanfiction should be a crime! It's THAT good! I'm really excited for the next chapter, though. I can't decide what this 'thing' is that's attacking students and house-elves, although I have a few (lame) possibilities that arn't even close to the truth, I bet! I also can't wait for more classroom scenes, so please write some more of those! I like the dynamic character of 'Captian' and love his classes! It would also be great to see how Severus acts in a potions class first hand. Lastly, I'm curious to see what you've got in mind for Draco, but I expect him to be working in the shadows for a bit longer, as it were. Well, UPDATE!! (Please try to soon!)Trust me when I say that we could all use another chapter!! Author's Response: Wow! This is such a great review I don't know how to respond. Thank you! I promise to update as soon as possible, but it will probably be two weeks before the next chapter. About the 'thing' attacking the students and house-elves: I tell you only that its nothing written in the books and entirely from my own imagination. I'm estatic that you like the classroom scenes, I've thought about adding more, but wasn't sure if people really enjoyed them. I like writing them simpily because I love anything that's history related, but I know many find that dull so...*shrugs* Thanks again for the wonderful review and I promise to update as soon as I'm able.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Tobias is a truly great character and I want to know more about his background. My favorite lines were: “She used that on my baby brother." (yes, Harry has a massively protective older brother!" and “I have killed people for far less than what you’ve done to my son.” Okay, now I must go back and reread the whole story from the beginning. They don't need me at work today. Author's Response: LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Actually I almost removed 'baby' from Severus's line, because I couldn't really see him saying that out loud, but decided against it, obviously. I'm glad I did to because people seem to love that line. Tobias is a favorite character of mine as well. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I promise to reveal what happened to Umbridge...eventually :p. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the scene and I promise to eventually reveal what went on between the four of them. I really wanted the last scene, but after I wrote it I didn't think it was as good as I had planned *shruggs*. Oh well. Thanks for the review and I'll post as soon as possible!
But really, you are such a great writer. I've been following your story for a while, (the first one was so good!) and I have decided that you are absolutely amazing! Keep writing!!!! -Elise Author's Response: I didn't mean to torture you with the cliffy. Okay, maybe I did just a little bit, but...please don't kill me. lol Thank you for saying I'm a good writer (I may finish up the next chapter sooner :) ). I'm glad you liked you liked the first sory as well hopefully this one will be just as good if not better. Thanks again! Thanks for the revew!)
Sorry, I've been off site for a while now (internet down) or I would have reviewed sooner (not to mention update.... >_ Author's Response: Yay! You're back! I was wondering what happened to you. Sevy is wonderful isn't he? Thanks for the review! |
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