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Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 02 Oct 2007 7:26 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo Hoo! He told! And I'm IMing with my pregnant daughter (who's downstairs) and I sent her the paragraph that Tobias said to Severus. She loved it. I hope it helps her the way it helped Severus. I think it will. Well Done! Now, care to go for 3 in a week?

    Author's Response:

    Congrats! soon to be grandma! I'm glad my writing skills could be put to good use. I can't believe it actually! My writing is good for something. I'm just sort of rambling now because I'm speechless. I can't believe it. Thank you, thank you, so, so, so, much.

    Thank you, I really don't know what else to say. Thank you doesn't seem to be enough.

    I'll try to update soon, but the next chapter isn't even finished yet and it has to be beta'd.

    DaughterOfAres.

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 02 Oct 2007 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Severus finally told Tobias! Hopefully Harry doesn't get in too much trouble for listening into thier conversation. It sounds like Umbridge has been assigning "lines" and hopefully Severus or Tobias will find out soon. I imagine they will not be pleased!

    Author's Response:

    Yup! Severus and Tobias finially talked. Harry won't get in much trouble, I promise. Umbridge will be discovered (grins evily).

    Thanks for the reveiw.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 01 Oct 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, lots of drama today. This thing roaming Hogwarts was what went to the Dursley's? I'm going to have to go reread that part but it's definately intriguing. What could be "feeding" on people? GULP! And Severus, you're making him so believable. The conflicting emotions of impeding parenthood are terrible even for a planned child but the single, grumpy father of an unexpected child can't be having an easy time of it. And I loved how father and brother hugged Harry like that. Perfect!

    Author's Response:

    Drama is fun. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm really tired and just got off a 13 hour day at work so this review response is horrible. Anyway thank you so much for the review and a new chapter is on its way.

    Thanks again.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope the Toad doesn't hurt Harry with his Dad in the castle. This chapter was good, poor Sev I think he'll be a good dad.

    Author's Response:

    You'll have to wait and see about Harry and Umbridge. I'm glad you liked the chapter and a new update should be up soon.

    Thanks for reviewing.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 6:12 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how you continue to keep Harry in character. This is one of most original Harry/Sev/Tobias stories I've ever read. It's interesting how in each chapter you juxtapose the brothers' relationships with their father.

    Thanks for updating! Can't wait to see what's next :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Honestly when I first thought of writing this I didn't think it was that orginal, but people keep telling me it is so...*shrugs*. You don't have long to wait to see what happens next and I'm sure you'll like the next chapter. *evil grin*

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 5:39 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon.

    Thanks for reviewing.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    *Holds high powered torch close to chest as she glances aroung the room as she reviews*

    Poor Tobias. I can almost feel the frustration he must be dealing with. Tee hee. Will Harry help Sevy with 'Baby sitting' duty? Maybe he could 'currupt' the new little Snape with 'Gryffindor-ness' and really annoy Sev. ^v^

    So the beastie has made an appearance. Ooooo. This is gettin' GOOD! ^-^

    Author's Response:

    *squeel* Really glad you like it. I must say I got some inspiration from you in....thing...department. I can assure you that Harry will have his turn with the next addition to the family *rubs palms together and grins evilly*

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 11:44 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    eek how scary and suspensful! Cant wait to read the next chap ^__^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter will be up soon.

    Thanks for the review.

    DaugherOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 9:06 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm curious to see if Umbrudge will assign "lines" in Harry's detention. Poor Severus will never get the chance to explain since one thing or another seems to interrupt his explanation. Great chapter and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. You'll have to wait and see about Umbridge. *shruggs* What can I say, I don't want to give the story away. Severus will get to explain...eventually. *grins evily*

    Thanks for reviewing and a new chapter is on its way.

    DaughterOfAres

Title: Close Encounters 30 Sep 2007 5:04 am
Reviewer: Arwensong (Signed) [Report This]
    Suspense building...Severus has to hurry up and spit it out about this baby on the way! He only has what, six more months? LOL! I loved how Tobias and he reacted to Harry and his friends saving the girl. Perfect blend of pride and "but don't ever do it again!"
    I was thinking vampire, there was a touch of Hellsing to the thoughts, all that hunger and feeding, and the age, but the professiors would presumably recognize a vampire. Not the basilisk either, as the girl isn't petrified or dead...hmmmm, no clue. So you must post again soon.

    Author's Response:

    A new chapter should be up soon. Glad I've got some suspense going. Tobias and Harry shall soon find out about 'baby Sev'. Glad you like the scene between Tobias and Harry after they discovered the girl. You're the first one to comment on it. I was afriad I went overboard a bit, so thank you for the reassurance.

    You're right, by the way, its not a vampire or a basilisk.

    Thanks for reviewing

    DaughterOfAres.


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