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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
I'm excited to see how detention with Umbridge goes and I have no idea what's roaming the castle. Hungry, hungry hippo? ;) Author's Response: Hungry, hungry hippo...hmmm...I like it. The next chapter will be ready soon. Hope you enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing DaughterOfAres
Author's Response: Thanks. You'll find in when the time is right. Thanks for the review. DaughterOfAres
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks.
Update Soon! and what is this new monster? I hope Sev grows into some confidence about becoming a father. He should tell Harry, maybe his younger brother would be some help? Author's Response: Thanks. Saz, was Tobias's house elf I introduced in the first chapter. He's not a main character or anything, just convienient. As for the new monster...you'll have to wait and see. The same goes for Sev. Much will be revealed in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. DaughterOfAres
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review and an update is in the near future.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait to see what Harry did in potions class. As for Severus calling Tobias 'sir' I tried to make it sound as though he were reverting back a bit. Normally he wouldn't call his dad sir all the time, just upon occasion, but he's in a very uncomfortable situation all of a sudden and he doesn't know what to do exactly. On one hand he wants to tell his dad about Serenity, but is still confused enough about the situation enought that can't just walk up to his father and go "oh, and dad, just thought you should know, you're going to be a grandfather. Toodles." I've tried to present Severus as a very reserved person who has a hard time opening up even to those that he loves. One way to do this was to have Severus suddenly start acting more formal around his father. I hope that clears up any confusion on Severus's formality. I do hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story. Thanks for the review. DaughterOfAres
Anywho, GREAT fic hun! It's rare that the sequals are as good as the originals but this is shaping up to be another enthralling piece of work! Kudos. ^-^ Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the scene with Serenity I figured people needed a reason for her actions even if the reason, from a logical person's standpoint, is insane. The Snapes luck is destined to get better eventually...:). Thanks again, I'm glad this fic is looking as good as the other one. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them. I hope this story doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More about Harry in potions class coming soon. I'm actually glad you're mad at Serenity, because not only would I be concerned if you liked her, but it also means I wrote her well enough to evoke feelings in my readers. A new update is on its way. Thanks for reviewing.
Is Harry going to get into trouble? Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. As for Harry...you'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing. |
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