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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 1 30 May 2022 10:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved seeing the Welcoming Feast from Snape’s perspective. I like that Snape’s radar is on alert for Quirrell.
Title: Chapter 1 05 Apr 2011 8:43 pm
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love how you left this.

    This chapter was quite well done - I really do enjoy Severus' POV in rewrites liek this. I'm really excited to see where this goes!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Apr 2009 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Harley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    it was a very good first chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 26 Oct 2008 8:37 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fabulous beginning! I loved Severus' thoughts, and he's got some clues to Harry's true nature already. I wonder how long it will take him to see...

    Great job!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Oct 2008 1:37 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a great beginning!
Title: Chapter 1 15 Aug 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I just found this story, thanks to the latest poll (of completed stories). I'm so glad to have found this!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jan 2008 12:19 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I found your story after your review of mine.
    Very interesting start with Snape's introspection.
    Thsoe eyes of Harry's are a feature of most stories, including mine. I always imagined they are very beautiful.
    Can't wait to see where this progresses.
Title: Chapter 1 22 Sep 2007 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow. Poor Severus, and poor Harry. I loved how you took the canon beginning and showed Severus' perspective. It helps explain why he had such an instant dislike to Harry--imagining him to be just like James and expecting to be treated like a celebrity.

    But I do hope he'll come to see that he's wrong. Harry is about as far from spoiled and arrogant as a child can get, and he really needs an adult who will watch over and protect him.

    Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 1 05 Sep 2007 8:02 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I was wondering why this story wasn't up here ... but now it is so "yays" all around!

    Yeah, I'm like one of those people who read this story at ff.net but never reviewed ... because I am made of lazysauce ...

    Anyway I always really did like your Snape and your Harry XD This chapter is a really nice way to start things off - plus Snape is just so cute when he's all like NOOOOOO about Lily's eyes. Yeah. Great chapter XD

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you like it!  (lazysauce....great phrase! I like it.)
Title: Chapter 1 05 Sep 2007 4:59 am
Reviewer: alexlee (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you've decided to post this story on this site!
    I totally fell in love with when I stumbled upon it in ff.net, even when there were only a couple of chapters. I know I haven't reviewed much but I'm a huge fan. I like the story, among other things, because it feels very real and canon-ish and yet is so sweet. I've honestly enjoyed every word and I like you're writing a lot.
    Naturally, I'm adding it to my favorites right away. I think I can safely say you will be welcomed here with lots of reviews and chocolate frogs. You certainly deserve it.

    Alexandra-

    P.D.:I'm also hoping you post Evolution, which I absolutely adore too, on this site soon so I can read it here ;-D

    Author's Response: Thanks, Alexandra! I was so flattered when Jan invited me to post here - I love this site! I'll be posting all of Equilibrium and Evolution too!

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