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Reviews For Equilibrium
This chapter was quite well done - I really do enjoy Severus' POV in rewrites liek this. I'm really excited to see where this goes!
Great job!
Very interesting start with Snape's introspection. Thsoe eyes of Harry's are a feature of most stories, including mine. I always imagined they are very beautiful. Can't wait to see where this progresses.
But I do hope he'll come to see that he's wrong. Harry is about as far from spoiled and arrogant as a child can get, and he really needs an adult who will watch over and protect him. Looking forward to more!
Yeah, I'm like one of those people who read this story at ff.net but never reviewed ... because I am made of lazysauce ... Anyway I always really did like your Snape and your Harry XD This chapter is a really nice way to start things off - plus Snape is just so cute when he's all like NOOOOOO about Lily's eyes. Yeah. Great chapter XD Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! (lazysauce....great phrase! I like it.)
I totally fell in love with when I stumbled upon it in ff.net, even when there were only a couple of chapters. I know I haven't reviewed much but I'm a huge fan. I like the story, among other things, because it feels very real and canon-ish and yet is so sweet. I've honestly enjoyed every word and I like you're writing a lot. Naturally, I'm adding it to my favorites right away. I think I can safely say you will be welcomed here with lots of reviews and chocolate frogs. You certainly deserve it. Alexandra- P.D.:I'm also hoping you post Evolution, which I absolutely adore too, on this site soon so I can read it here ;-D Author's Response: Thanks, Alexandra! I was so flattered when Jan invited me to post here - I love this site! I'll be posting all of Equilibrium and Evolution too! |
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